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 Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 1:24 pm
Ight man drop the beef
lets get on with the racist s**t
one endin battle through the beef
This site aint nothin serious to be getting so upset about
So last battle lets make this good
16 Bars
2 Lined Bars
No Biting
No Feeding
Blind Spit
24 Hours to Drop
Voting must have a good explanation ok
Good Example
Vote = "Name"
Explanation = Atleast 3 reasons
Bad Vote - Won't Count
Vote "NAME" for being more enjoyable
or
Vote "NAME" for having overall better verse
^^Bad votes because no explanations to your reasonin
Fair Enough
1 Good Battle To End The Beef - YOU ACCEPT?
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 1:25 pm
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 1:26 pm
100 bars. eek you crazy shits....
ah well. good luck to both of you
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 1:28 pm
Ight yea a lil crazy i made it down to 16 Bars
200 lines wuz a bit much
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 1:29 pm
well i mean im sure you both coulda done it, im jus saying that would wear my a** out.
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 1:31 pm
It was previously set to 100 bars?
I wasn't in time to see that in the rules.
I refuse to battle you, now, unless the standard is raised to 100 bars.
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 1:36 pm
Makairo It was previously set to 100 bars? I wasn't in time to see that in the rules. I refuse to battle you, now, unless the standard is raised to 100 bars. So you're keen on writing Harry Potter novels?
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 1:36 pm
Raskit Makairo It was previously set to 100 bars? I wasn't in time to see that in the rules. I refuse to battle you, now, unless the standard is raised to 100 bars. So you're keen on writing Harry Potter novels?
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 1:37 pm
Makairo It was previously set to 100 bars? I wasn't in time to see that in the rules. I refuse to battle you, now, unless the standard is raised to 100 bars. You expect people when they vote to read through 200 lines of text!!.. u crazaaay?!?!!?... gonk Make that.. 400 lines..
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 2:05 pm
Well, all I have to say, is if it is going to be 100 bars....or lines, whatever it is, then you need to do it all at once. No pre-written, no taking time to write, it has to be done all at once.
The only way to ******** do that right.
Plus...its not that hard to do.
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 2:11 pm
Maleficent Chaos Well, all I have to say, is if it is going to be 100 bars....or lines, whatever it is, then you need to do it all at once. No pre-written, no taking time to write, it has to be done all at once. The only way to ******** do that right. Plus...its not that hard to do. If they going to do 100 Bars, they better do it audio, because reading it is going to incredibly hard and around 20 bars you forget the imaginative flow that there is in the verse.
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 2:43 pm
Yorun De Pimp Maleficent Chaos Well, all I have to say, is if it is going to be 100 bars....or lines, whatever it is, then you need to do it all at once. No pre-written, no taking time to write, it has to be done all at once. The only way to ******** do that right. Plus...its not that hard to do. If they going to do 100 Bars, they better do it audio, because reading it is going to incredibly hard and around 20 bars you forget the imaginative flow that there is in the verse. I won't do it audio because I refuse to curse on my audio. In terms of written verses however I'll gladly abuse profanity. rofl And perhaps 100 bars is a bit too much for him. I suppose I'll abide by his rules and construct something gradually. Already half way done with the verse.
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 3:15 pm
You're no more than my formula's chemical catalyst,
You'll be the outed feature in this equation called battlin',
No victories will pass through a horse whose steadily straddlin'
his jockey and though you continue to mock me
it eats away at you knowing that you're not me
For starters you're embarkin' on a mission to a battleground unchartered,
I thought you'd prepare before engaging me but you're no smarter
than the rest of the playmates who Hop wit' curvacious Hips,
And drip saliva, semen and bullshit from their lips
Your rhymes are cheesy and you constantly finish last,
You melt easily like your content's made out of Kraft,
You've written non-sense, yet you lie and call it a Rap,
Your attempts are as meaningless as one hand trying to clap
I'll Mine my own Business and discover lyrical gold,
Your entire being of creativity can only find you coal,
I'll line you up like vegetation and divide you into rows,
I can care for and nourish you daily and still nothing will grow
This is a game of Makairo Says so I control your every action,
I command you to challenge me so I can watch you sever yourself into fractions,
I'll have you grippin' your dome like you're holdin' your life's handle
after you've been mentally traumatized and dismantled
I alone am the squad extinguishing your bomb's fuse,
You should be callin' 311 for this kind of abuse,
This ain't an explosion because you skin color's white,
It's the fact that you lie & wish you were as black as kid *clap* Dy-No-Mite!
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 7:27 pm
They say you dope, ha only through medicals
As you swallow chemicals hoping to lyrically find your testicles
While you sucking c**k, but thats your choice by mouth
As i slip you arsenic, and your voice dies out
You try to clean up your act, so you have your boys try shout
Yeah you a pimp, because you Mak Air, O' wow i lied
That was your name as it transformed you into a transvestite
Your one of them Men~with~goals, hoping to drop your genitals
Yeah but that happening is like your rap career, you Pretend~To~Grow
You can't drop hot if you spit through a heater
Because you dropping hott, is like grabbing your lyrics from the freezer
Your punches only touch ice, which is why your mic freezes
So no hearing you rap because You couldnt elevate, if you had help from Jesus
You = Promise; No subject on the stage, because you choke and vomit
I'll help you lose, as you get cold, like i broke the promise
No need to stop-it, because your a disease, i hear you when you breath
And i'm your vaccine, i'll lyrically kill you, as your grave faces da feet
(Defeat) haha
Its funny, you trying to be racist, looking for races in the yellow pages
Just to find your own picture under *No Rap Talent for these Faces*
You coming to this battle hott, is you coming with hot sauce
Because no way you dope, When even in your dreams this battle you lost
You throw no punches, because you have no muscle
And you trying to beat me, is like The suburbs trying to hustle
No chance for your rap career ever reaching the top
Because you reaching hell, is the only time anyone will think your raps hott!!!
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 8:55 pm
This may seem weird but... smurf i think he got ya... His disses were a lot more diverse as yours tended to just be boxed in to the whole "you think you hot" phase... maybe this would have been closer if you did a little more outside of the box sort ta speak... There are only a few rappers who can kinda get away with saying the same thing over and over again... but even they aren't that great... with that being said some of your punches for this reason just turned out to be fillers instead which takes away from the verse as a whole...
Mak's verse had a lot of what I love to use... WORDPLAY... Big up's for that! So it added to his already wicked display of lyricism which oddly enough got his verse finally looking like a legit battle verse instead of a song about his opponent if you know what I mean...
Anyways
Vote: Mak
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