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 Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 5:49 am
This is only to prove Raskit wrong and to prove that there is a significant boundary line between our level of skill.
1 Verse each
5 bar minimum, no maximum
2 line bars
No Feeding/Recycling
Accept and post your verse
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 8:40 am
Mak is still running but what is his mouth flappin for
Claiming to walk but his talking is bound to happen more
Often than not his actions and thoughts is zapping ya
He probably wants to exterminate Whites in Africa
The new face of black America? I hope not.
He probably thinking, "Hey, I should use race as my dope spot.
So when I spit a verse a get into a bit of writer's block
Then I can pull out some slurs and it's sure to untie a knot!"
Good job! You found your calling card I guess
Like that traffic accident was to Kayne West
Like them nine shots was to a 50 Cent
Spit a honkey here or there just to make a nifty dent
Now as you can tell I ain't gonna spit a punchline
Or blind you with metaphors and multi syllable rhymes
I'ma stoop to your level just this one epic occasion
Easy for relating, simpler for persuasion
Dissing random Caucasians, just to get them men raging
Isn't the kind of way to keep em off your case and
Maybe you feel that you can thrive in that environment
But many others just can't survive what that's inspiring
You planting the seeds for which bad plants could sprout
But it rolls of your shoulder and that hands your drought
To an innocent bystander look at your victims
Spit at the higher rankers but your punches they miss them
So you spit at little ones, O.G and D.O.C.
Think you up with MC but can't beat his mini-me*
Weird? When Smurf could have beaten that man handly
I vote against you once and now your a** is branding me
As a dickriding internet wankster...
Come on dog. What you put me in that game for?
I can't believe that you'd turn your back on a *****
Look back at the bigger picture, hate me cause of a "wigga"
Whatever you dudes is calling him that's the reason you dissing me?
Delete one of my topics for reasons shrouded in mystery?
It's so confusing three months ago we disputing
But settled it like some gentlemen. PM just you and
Me. Not spreading, spraying, back and forth on LG
Only been just several months so listen you tell me
Where the respect at? Lately you all cold
and immature so look man where did your balls go?
Take it back matter of fact where did it all go?
Acting as you all bad since the past. Although
Remember that audio thing that couldn't quite work.
Because you telling everybody that your mic went berserk?
Then tell me behind the doors you couldn't afford to battle me
On such a grand scale. Your pride missing like Natalie.**
Didn't want a catastrophe you made the excuse
That you ain't had the expereince to battle the truth
And yet I still had the text battle with you...
... But guess what? I only been through two prior!
Now I'm hot fiya! I got the hang of it!
Learned some new tips caught on to the slang of it
But you? Still the same since I came through this door first
And you, will remain in the game of who bores worse
Restrain from true improvement, refrain from a new solution
To answer your many questions. Continued verbal pollution.
I was like you once. Refusing to do a multi.
Now that s**t changed and I do it better than most see
I can admit defeat to make weakness a strength
And now I posses the skill to match you at any length
But you? Still in the same cave. Still on the same page.
Now I'm the future and you is still the same slave.
(No Feeding bruh!)
*Lost to Lil MC
**An Alabama Resident missing for almost two years
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 8:43 am
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 9:04 am
I like the fact he says hes not up to me 3nodding
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 9:17 am
You complain about me hittin' a Smurf with 100 lines
but then you come and try to diss me with more than just 100 rhymes,
You're a grown a** man on a children's website,
Take your 18 year old a** and join the army 'cuz your moms ain't gonna support you your whole life,
You think you're that nice - but your flow's got a cold,
Every time I hear an audio it sounds like you've got some s**t up your nose,
And maybe it's a fetish - or maybe your girlfriend's p***y is dry,
But you had to make an entire song about water and the sad part is you actually tried,
I'm a racist for winnin' battles and a negroe spiritual for havin' faith,
It's not my fault, CT, that you look in the mirror each day with disgrace,
I can create a joke and no one else needs to get it,
I'm proud to know it's prominence and I'd repeat it after I said it
just so I know you'll never forget it,
When you came here you still didn't have respect,
but in due time I literally forced you to respect it,
Without a tiff and without a single word to defy
me you would happily accept it,
I take on foes with no fear like Fujin,
You go up against Raskit-level faggots and you're still losin',
What are you provin'?
You're makin' an essay to talk about nothin'
Whenever I do it I win battles - rappin' and me are like cousins,
We're related and we've known eachother for life,
You're associated by marriage - "Rap, come meet my wife",
If anybody calls me out, regardless, I would take 'em on,
Unlike you - beg for an audio just to be keyed against and still deficated on,
"Ebony, Ivory, live in perfect harmony",
This isn't a battle - sounds morel ike C Chokin' is tryin' to bargain wit' me,
I'm not the one who was startin' wit' me
but I'll gladly bring it to an end,
Go sample some more Stevie Griffin and see how many you sell,
This is utterly flowin' like I'm runnin' milk in your mouth,
I'm blastin' my weight out - four barrels like cow,
You're no more than a mouse runnin' beneath a stampede
of Elephants, and I'm liftin' my foot to see no more than a bloody scene,
This is like foreplay and you're my bitches bra, son,
You've been toyed with and literally undone,
Like when she pulls my zipper down and Mr. Happy makes his grand entrance,
You ********' Napoleon Dynamite type ***** - I can sum up your ********' story in 1 sentence!
"I'm mad at Makairo because I don't know what Hip-Hop is,
The Smurfs totally pwn and so does water - I call it the drip-drop bizz",
This ain't no s**t poppin',
It's my s**t droppin'
all over your game - looks like cheese doodles,
This ***** gets ******** by more dogs than female poodles,
I'll cross your eyes and divide your skull wit' a series of lines that defy the ties that bind as I grind my weapon into your mind, the words I collide and rhyme to penetrate your psyche,
Your aspirations are to be just like me,
But instead you wish to eliminate the opposition so you try to fight me
and end up gettin' sniped, B,
We were friends - you gave me beats
and I use to respect your style,
And now it's your soul that I've come to reap
'cuz you're actin' like a spoiled child,
If you don't get your way you start to complain,
Your tears splash about and fall like rain,
And not just a storm - it sounds like a hurricane
'cuz you b***h and moan so much it drives people insane,
Go play with Zelda beats and watch some Sailor Moon,
You can hop on the couch wit' a DVD and the hideous Boo,
Pull down the shades and enjoy the show and the rest of the night,
You just got bombed by kid *clap* DY-NO-MITE!
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 9:24 am
*smh* Some people just don't learn do they... Listen, Mak, take a min and really look at my verse... just like this conflict, I throw little to no insults to down your name... And yet you? First thing you say is I'ma grown man on a kiddie site? WE THE SAME AGE rofl but I know, ignorance is bliss...
VOTE LG!!!!
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 9:26 am
You're older than me, p***k.
Next time I'll make a rule against lying. neutral
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 9:29 am
Makairo You're older than me, p***k. Next time I'll make a rule against lying. neutral by how much man?
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 9:33 am
I'm sorry..
You're a very good person, you know that?
At times I can be a little rough around the edges, only because I tend to get a little more vehement with my attitude when I feel for something extremely positively.
Smurf was a problem on his own whch you seemed to escalate, even though it might have not been your direct intention.
Every can get a little crazy at times, it isn't just be. I should've remembered my own words and quotes. It's not who started the situation, it's how you react to it. Unfortunately I poured a couple of cans of gasoline onto the fire...
No more beef...I prefer Chicken anyway.
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 9:38 am
Makairo I'm sorry.. You're a very good person, you know that? At times I can be a little rough around the edges, only because I tend to get a little more vehement with my attitude when I feel for something extremely positively. Smurf was a problem on his own whch you seemed to escalate, even though it might have not been your direct intention. Every can get a little crazy at times, it isn't just be. I should've remembered my own words and quotes. It's not who started the situation, it's how you react to it. Unfortunately I poured a couple of cans of gasoline onto the fire... No more beef...I prefer Chicken anyway. ... alright man... Good battle by the way.. I didn't think you still had that many lines in ya after the Smurf battle...
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 9:43 am
C Teezy Makairo I'm sorry.. You're a very good person, you know that? At times I can be a little rough around the edges, only because I tend to get a little more vehement with my attitude when I feel for something extremely positively. Smurf was a problem on his own whch you seemed to escalate, even though it might have not been your direct intention. Every can get a little crazy at times, it isn't just be. I should've remembered my own words and quotes. It's not who started the situation, it's how you react to it. Unfortunately I poured a couple of cans of gasoline onto the fire... No more beef...I prefer Chicken anyway. ... alright man... Good battle by the way.. I didn't think you still had that many lines in ya after the Smurf battle... Like I said..me and Rap are related. xd It's birth right, so I'll always be fresh. Besides, ever since 300 bars was dropped by game I've been trying to do the same thing. But at most I can only diss a single target for about 100 bars..that's why whenever I make long posts, they're always some of my best. It's almost like practice for the major leagues.
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 9:56 am
You know..I think about battles in advance.
I even pre-write for battles I don't even know I'm going to have.
It's almost like recycling, but I've never used those rhymes before, so technically it's still sexy. xd
I have this one diss I made a while back that I never used. It spells out Makairo, each line starting with each letter. 3 1/2 bars of sexy!
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 10:19 am
Makairo You know..I think about battles in advance. I even pre-write for battles I don't even know I'm going to have. It's almost like recycling, but I've never used those rhymes before, so technically it's still sexy. xd I have this one diss I made a while back that I never used. It spells out Makairo, each line starting with each letter. 3 1/2 bars of sexy! I guess I'm the opposite... I'm more of a reactive planner... In this one I just pretty much keystyled off the top everything I was thinking at the time... Kinda stream-of-concious(sp) like... The planning part is I at least had a sort of premise to speak about beforehand... I tried to have no disses in the battle whatsoever which is hard for me to do seeing that I'm a diss-heavy battler so you can kinda see leaks of disses in the battle... But I'm just rambling now
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 12:03 pm
I'll comment. They were both too long, more like poems or monologues that raps. Losing their flows frequently, not properly read over, no devices, hardly any wordplay, Mak's had more disses, but they weren't exactly the greatest in strength.
A poncey rivalry.
A message for Mak: Why did you diss me in your rap? Another thing I ain't voting on, you just dickrid me, dissed me, I've won most of my battles against higher opponents - yet you still managed to use me as an example of a s**t mc. ******** you man.
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 12:12 pm
Raskit I'll comment. They were both too long, more like poems or monologues that raps. Losing their flows frequently, not properly read over, no devices, hardly any wordplay, Mak's had more disses, but they weren't exactly the greatest in strength. A poncey rivalry. Why the ******** did you diss me in your rap? Another thing I ain't voting on, you just dickrid me, dissed me, ******** you man. I didn't insult you. I said faggots at your level. I never called you one, and I was VERY specific in doing so, I figured you'd get upset if I did insult you. So read that line back before you make me give you 50 bars. xd j/k
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