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How should the story continue?
Cole is rescued as he's being attacked.
62%
 62%  [ 5 ]
Cole fights back agaisnt the zombies, and continues his journey minus one arm
12%
 12%  [ 1 ]
Let the story end where it is
12%
 12%  [ 1 ]
Something else, see my post for a suggestion.
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 12%  [ 1 ]
Total Votes : 8


LilaTheMoo
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 28, 2006 1:15 pm


I've become pissed off with my story after writing much of the second chapter. So I've come up with 2 options on the second chapter of my story.

One, the main character, Cole, is saved by a group of survivors shortly after he passes out at the end of part one.
Two, Cole fights off passing out, and retaliates against the zombies, fighting as much as he can without an arm until he eventually perishes.

Pick a choice, for the one with the most votes becomes the next part of the story. Edit: Had to start the poll over, everyone was picking the gold option, which was of no help.

Here's a link to my story, just incase you weren't aware:
http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=5220187
PostPosted: Mon Aug 28, 2006 1:55 pm


I vote for Choice 1.

Here's my idea: Cole is attacked, saved at the last second, blacks out, has flashbacks about the incident leading up to where he is, and wakes up with some new ability/power, ready to kill more zombies.

Omega Darkness


LilaTheMoo
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Dapper Lunatic

PostPosted: Mon Aug 28, 2006 2:37 pm


Omega Darkness
I vote for Choice 1.

Here's my idea: Cole is attacked, saved at the last second, blacks out, has flashbacks about the incident leading up to where he is, and wakes up with some new ability/power, ready to kill more zombies.
I had planned to do the "Cole is attacked, saved at last second, blacks out" part already. Infact I'd written quite a bit using that base for the story, however now powers, or flashbacks would be included. Im trying to write the story in a somewhat realistic fashion. Like George A Romero realistic. Something that can be made without having to avoid Deus Ex Machina.
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