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 Posted: Tue May 17, 2005 5:40 am
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Posted: Tue May 17, 2005 9:08 am
I likes it. =DD Continuuuuue? Pwease? =^.^=
But in the last sentence, I think you mean 'fateful' not 'faithful' and 'dare' not 'dear.' sweatdrop
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Posted: Tue May 17, 2005 4:48 pm
Bourei1489 I likes it. =DD Continuuuuue? Pwease? =^.^= But in the last sentence, I think you mean 'fateful' not 'faithful' and 'dare' not 'dear.' sweatdrop I am. I've written the first two paragraps of the first chapter. ^^ Ack! Sorry... I did mean faithful, but I did do the typo of 'dare' wrong... hate typos, will fix that up. ^^
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Posted: Thu May 19, 2005 1:18 pm
I am in love with this story. Are the people that go to the valley turning into cat-people?
Also: In the last sentence in the second paragraph, I think you mean "fairy tale", not "fairy tail".
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Posted: Thu May 19, 2005 6:10 pm
Tenshi no Shizen I am in love with this story. Are the people that go to the valley turning into cat-people? Also: In the last sentence in the second paragraph, I think you mean "fairy tale", not "fairy tail". Not telling. ^^ You'll have to find out. ^^ Thank you, I hate typos and/or spelling mistakes I don't pic up when I should.
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Posted: Fri May 20, 2005 1:36 pm
You know, my opinion....Typos just make you look really cute. *smiles* No...Seriously... neutral
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Posted: Fri May 20, 2005 3:29 pm
Usako-san You know, my opinion....Typos just make you look really cute. *smiles* No...Seriously... neutral And that's meant to help me how?
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Posted: Sat May 21, 2005 4:57 pm
wendy_moon Usako-san You know, my opinion....Typos just make you look really cute. *smiles* No...Seriously... neutral And that's meant to help me how? It's meant to stab you into double checking stuff before you post it -stabs-
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Posted: Sat May 21, 2005 5:07 pm
wicked_lady wendy_moon Usako-san You know, my opinion....Typos just make you look really cute. *smiles* No...Seriously... neutral And that's meant to help me how? It's meant to stab you into double checking stuff before you post it -stabs- I did double check it. I can't help it if I don't notice the wrong spelling for a word when the spell checker doesn't pick it up because it's spelt the same as a different word. sweatdrop It happens all the time.
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Posted: Sat May 21, 2005 5:11 pm
wendy_moon wicked_lady wendy_moon Usako-san You know, my opinion....Typos just make you look really cute. *smiles* No...Seriously... neutral And that's meant to help me how? It's meant to stab you into double checking stuff before you post it -stabs- I did double check it. I can't help it if I don't notice the wrong spelling for a word when the spell checker doesn't pick it up because it's spelt the same as a different word. sweatdrop It happens all the time. I wasn't talking about spelling, I meant re-reading it for grammer errors. Believe it or not, it detracts fron the readability of your story if people have to change the words in their minds. But I think I've gone through this with you before.
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Posted: Sun May 22, 2005 2:49 am
wicked_lady I wasn't talking about spelling, I meant re-reading it for grammer errors. Believe it or not, it detracts fron the readability of your story if people have to change the words in their minds. But I think I've gone through this with you before. I do do that. It's not like I'll pick up everything. And I don't have a beta anymore either. So I send it into the group, and to th Voyager Online writers form, and get reviews and ideas for how to fix it up.
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Posted: Sun May 22, 2005 5:50 am
~nods~
Interesting. ~awaits more~
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Posted: Sun May 22, 2005 4:07 pm
Dana C Scott ~nods~ Interesting. ~awaits more~ I'll try and get out more soon, I'm just having to rewrite bits and pieces of the Prologue. ^^ The people on Voyager Online are very helpful, they give a paragraph by paragraph analysis about you story, as well as giving you suggestions on what to change, and what to keep, and where to expand on information and stuff.
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Posted: Tue May 24, 2005 5:09 am
Usako-san You know, my opinion....Typos just make you look really cute. *smiles* No...Seriously... neutral Like it, and like the siggy usako-san
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Posted: Wed Apr 19, 2006 8:35 am
Oh wow, that sucked me in. XD TBC?! It betta be C-ed. XDD 'Cuz I wanna read more. TT-TT
If you have any that is...
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