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darknessandcheese

PostPosted: Sat Aug 19, 2006 8:02 pm


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I haven't posted anything for a while, so here's my character Bubble Macairo Pop.

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Criticism is always loved! heart
Seriously, tell me everything that's wrong with it, I don't mind if you rip the picture to shreads with your criticism, as long as you tell me how to improve. 3nodding


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PostPosted: Fri Aug 25, 2006 5:58 pm


I love the colours you chose. biggrin Green and purple go so well together, imo. XD

I know I'm probably being overly critical, but I do notice that you forgot a piece of lineart on his inner-elbow area on the right side. XD

Also, I think it'd look a bit better if you would've chose different shades of purples for his hair and his eyes.. maybe something darker? Using all the same shade of purple throughout the picture makes it look bland.

You could also make the shading more dramatic... brighter highlights, darker shadows, etc etc. Just to make the whole thing look more interesting. :3

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