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Shiro-Nami

PostPosted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 8:01 pm


The coloring is totally half.... Butted?? LOL anyways but here is the finished project...

please critique!

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 19, 2006 1:06 pm


Nice. biggrin

The only thing that really bugs me is the lack of shading on the jacket pockets, and detail around the collar. Why is there no shading? D: There should be shading there, dammit.

Tawney
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Chase Keyhole

PostPosted: Sat Aug 19, 2006 3:01 pm


I like it. But I also agree with Tawney, it would be much better with shading under the pockets and under the collar. Yeah.
PostPosted: Sat Aug 19, 2006 3:14 pm


He looks damn hot to me.
But I sadly, have to agree with everyone else.
Needs some shading. It'll make it pop.
and is the ends of his.. Its a his right? hair suppose to have gray tips or did you just blend colors?
otherwise you could clean it up a bit, for the confused like me. (:

I love it though

Spinelle


Shiro-Nami

PostPosted: Sat Aug 19, 2006 7:01 pm


wow your right... but I totally half butted all the shaidng and coloring so I really dont care XD I was doing this guy a favor by tkaing a commsion that was a full body shot ( I usually do only headshots) plus i took it at a VERY low price... so basically for how low a price he gave... this is what it gets him!
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