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Kurai_Yamino
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 2:19 am


There was once a young girl who had to leave her family and friends to gain a new experiance. She had to go through so much pain and sorrow from being too far from her home but she felt if she left like she wanted to, she would be a failure and her family and friends would think her a fool and weak for letting her heart rule her. Every time that the young girl would make contact with anyone that she cared for, afterwards, she would feel like taking her heart out of her cheast. That would hurt less than it did everytime she had to say goodbye. in her dreams, she would be home and would never have to be alone again. her faimly would allways be there and her best friends in the univerce were all there. and when she woke, the pain would be as real and as tangible as the fountains of tears that would flow from her heart and soul and spill out onto her cheeks and pillow. he growing of wings is a pain fil one but as she grew slowly, oh so slowly, she began to try out the irridesent wings and she began to take to the sky. The pain was alwauys there but her heart kept going, even tough she had wanted to give up so many time before now.  
PostPosted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 10:30 am


((I'm so sorry about this morning. I really do love you.))

Well, she needs a name. What is happening? Who are the other characters? What is going to make this rp move and flow?

or do you mean this is a story you are writing?

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 23, 2006 4:35 pm


well I have sort of an Idea on how it could go but I want that to be hush hush cause I might give or sell the IDEa heart
PostPosted: Fri Sep 08, 2006 2:35 am


well.. she has to have a spiffy name......

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 27, 2006 7:10 pm


ok I have an Idea for this story but I don't know if I want to do this Idea...

It may be called "The Quest for Wings."
PostPosted: Thu Nov 02, 2006 10:08 pm


I'm also interested to know if this is a story your working on or if its an RP campaign. Maybe it could be both. You could write a story about what happens in the RP. But either way, it still needs more detailed information. What else is going on in the story? Is there a plot? Stuff like that.

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PostPosted: Tue Dec 05, 2006 1:47 pm


The first thing we should know is what the girl's goal is. Is she searching for something, why can't she be with anyone, ect.. Sounds like a cool idea.
PostPosted: Thu Dec 07, 2006 4:58 pm


In other words, it's lacking plot. And come to think of it, this thread would actually belong in the Writing Desk and Drawing Pad subforum.

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 04, 2007 6:32 pm


well, in her culture everyone has to go on this quest to find thier wings adn she has not , as of yet. sweatdrop
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