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Jamanda

PostPosted: Thu Aug 17, 2006 8:22 am


o.k so here's a poem i wrote called the after life

Waiting for you at the border of the After Life
You shall visit it soon for the reaper approaches
In the dead of the night,
To steal you away and take you to me
My minions of making, of breaking , and taking
Cursed beings that will do for me
Anything I ask of them
My biding is theirs to do...
For failure the penance is death,
I do to my men as I do to all,
As I sit on my throne and await man's fall…
Someday your soul will be mine
That day will surly be fine
I’m dark and I’m dreary
But none call me weary,
for fear of what I’ll do
I just might kill them to
it all depends on how I feel
until then, keep it real


don't yell at me for bad spelling please! 3nodding
PostPosted: Thu Aug 17, 2006 4:55 pm


Very good work...if your running firefox...get the google toolbar...it has a spell checker on it XD

Ryoichi Shiro


Harukiko

PostPosted: Thu Aug 17, 2006 8:37 pm


Ooo! Nice! It's a very dark poem indeed. ^__^ There are a few spelling errors, but I'm sure you can find them on your own when taking a second look at it.
PostPosted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 4:49 am


thank you both! i'm glad you like it 3nodding

Jamanda


Ryoichi Shiro

PostPosted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 11:59 am


As a fellow poet...rock the darkness for all it is worth, don't let anyone tell you that it is horrible...confidence is the number one driving force for all artists XD
PostPosted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 1:02 pm


i wouldn't change it even if someone did say they hated it, i love the darkness, that's almost all i can write...

Jamanda

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