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Dr. Valentine Vice Captain
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 Posted: Wed Aug 16, 2006 8:37 pm
 I'm not really sure if I even had a concept for this one (aside from the obvious avatar art angle).
I've been working on this comic that is all gritty and scratchy, I guess I wanted to make something smooth and creamy.
trivia
I hated the eyes as I had done them at first, so these eyes are actually v2.0
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Posted: Thu Aug 17, 2006 9:58 pm
i dont like the air brushed highlight with the cell shading. I think most because they're just all white and too soft and sort of weak looking.
does look smooth though, you just need to reconcile the shading a bit.
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Dr. Valentine Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 2:58 am
Yeah, I see what you mean there. I really should learn how to do colored hilights.
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Posted: Tue Aug 22, 2006 8:33 am
The eyes need... whites maybe. but those slit like pupils don't look good. pupils should be roundish. unless you're a cat
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Dr. Valentine Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Aug 22, 2006 2:53 pm
The Dred Pirate Gossy The eyes need... whites maybe. but those slit like pupils don't look good. pupils should be roundish. unless you're a cat
I tried to make the slit pupils as inoffensive as possible...
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Posted: Wed Aug 23, 2006 10:00 pm
Um I like the weird shading stuff but I don’t know anything about digital art so you can take my comments with a chunk of salt (is that the expression o.o?)
I really like her hip and legs but the rest of it isn’t as organic with the lines. I’m like WHOA legs and hips curvy and smooth but the hands are like stubs.
But there just my feelings and whutnot, not like a proper critique or anything.
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Dr. Valentine Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Aug 26, 2006 4:01 am
The Magic Hate Ball II I really like her hip and legs but the rest of it isn’t as organic with the lines. I’m like WHOA legs and hips curvy and smooth but the hands are like stubs.
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