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Posted: Sun Aug 13, 2006 6:41 pm

SO, I'm just going to continue to use this thread and update it with pictures. ='D Takes up less room than creating a new thread each time, right? I'll just change the Date for updating each time there's a new image. *nods*

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I don't have much to say on this. . . I don't like how her face came out, it looks funny to me. Can someone help me out with pointing out whats wrong? Maybe the jaw is too large? Iunno.
I'd love some pointers on her ringlet curls and clothing.

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Hokay this one took me waaay too long. The gravitational pull is off, especially with the guy (Rigg), I know, but I was trying for that "leaning back to lift her face up and look into her eyes thang". Horrible. Dx I was never good with gravitational pull stuff.

I do enjoy how the hair came out~. I was looking at that tutorial about hair, can't remember who showed it to me, and it helped. Shading is horrible too, I got way too smudgy for some reason.

HOMG Rigg's hand! I tried to do the rest how I did that and I failed horribly. Dx< I was totally lookin' for the bones and stuff, that really stuck out. Y'know what I mean?

This was done for an RP, I love this picture (prolly why I have it in my siggy). This is like my third time doing children and my first doing a boy. ='D

Now this, took me forever! I love the picture though. Lines and shading is off in places, but I don't care. ;_;" And you might say something about the lack of teeth on the left side, but I tried drawing them, they just didn't look exactly right. . .So I just made it black. ='D

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/37697555/

Do your worst! I love critiques, they make me happy. D=< Also, you may take the picture and draw lines and whatnot if need be. <3

Posted: Sun Aug 13, 2006 8:35 pm

O____O
I'm in awe....I mean the couple looks awesome even if they are a little bit off balance.
The babies, devilishly cute x]
The lips, total WOW.
Awesome job :]
(cause i'm not great in this area of realism and I can't find anything wrong with any of em')
<3

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Chase Keyhole

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Posted: Mon Aug 14, 2006 11:22 am

Those babies are hella scary... O.o

Posted: Mon Aug 14, 2006 11:32 am

I'm glad the tutorial helped you! -^^- The hair looks lovely (still ten times better'n I could do. ><) and the hand! -worships the hand- It's just amazing. heart The guys head looks a little off to me.. it might just be me though, but I think what's putting me off is the roundness of his jawline. sweatdrop I guess I'm too used to seeing those either uber-square or uber-thin looking anime jawlines! v.v

Demon babies! I can't find anything wrong.... >< And I love the teddy bear head. -^^-

Omg, the fooooolds. How do you do it? I'm gonna steal your talent now. heart

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Posted: Mon Aug 14, 2006 3:41 pm

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The guys head looks a little off to me.. it might just be me though, but I think what's putting me off is the roundness of his jawline. sweatdrop I guess I'm too used to seeing those either uber-square or uber-thin looking anime jawlines! v.v

Omg, the fooooolds. How do you do it? I'm gonna steal your talent now. heart

Rigg's head looked off to me also, I thought it was the hair, but now that you mention the jaw. . . D=< He has a Jay Leno chin. ;_;''

D=>! The folds look horrible, I didn't know what I was doin'. D=< I'm hoping to just get better with them though.

Posted: Mon Aug 14, 2006 4:30 pm

I've just kinda recently gone into realism, but still...

The amount of detail you put into all of this is just mind-blowing. xD What size paper did you put all this on?

Yeah, the jawbone of the guy did confuse me for a moment. Also, the ear seems a little off to me, I'm not quite sure why. I dunno if it's just how his head is slightly tilted or what, but it seems... a little odd.
Oh, I also love their thick bottoms. xD I just dunno why, but the utter thickness is so... likeable...
Also, again I dunno if it's just me, but are the arms slightly longer and/or shorter in some places than they should be? I'll have to look into that later.
The girls' face also seems to be a little shallow-set compared to the guy's, but once again, I'm not quite sure if that's just me comparing you to my drawing style. *shrugs* Overally, very beautiful. Very.

TEH BABIES!
I don't know much about baby anatomy, but I DO know they're adorable. In a really demonic way. xDD

And the lips! Man! They're wonderful, regardless of the black tooth. xD They portray the emotions openly, and the contours are well drawn, too.

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Posted: Mon Aug 14, 2006 4:42 pm

wow, you're getting awesoemtastic! (form the last time i saw your old art) KEEP UP TEH GOOD WORK!

Posted: Mon Aug 14, 2006 5:00 pm

sparklypiggy

The amount of detail you put into all of this is just mind-blowing. xD What size paper did you put all this on?

Also, the ear seems a little off to me, I'm not quite sure why. I dunno if it's just how his head is slightly tilted or what, but it seems... a little odd.
Oh, I also love their thick bottoms. xD I just dunno why, but the utter thickness is so... likeable...
Also, again I dunno if it's just me, but are the arms slightly longer and/or shorter in some places than they should be? I'll have to look into that later.
The girls' face also seems to be a little shallow-set compared to the guy's, but once again, I'm not quite sure if that's just me comparing you to my drawing style. *shrugs* Overally, very beautiful. Very.

I use a 9x11.5in paper usually (like on this one), but in some others I've gone to a 10x12in, which is so much harder because there's more space for me to leave smudges. Dx

The ear? Probably because it's too small and a little higher than it should be? That's what I was thinking, but my ma said it looked fine to her. Dx Never go to parents for art advice, they'll always tell ya your work is wonderful. Which I might ad, doesn't help. I love to do large buttons, this piece I'm working on for the winner of my Art Auction, has LARGE buttons. . .At least right now, I'm not sure if she'll want them this big. . .>.>;

I don't see a problem with the arm lengths, maybe it's just our differences in styles? Hmmm. . . Shallow set to her face? I'm really no good with figuring out what things mean~. Is it like her face is too dark, or like it almost seems as if she should be more in the background? D=>?

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