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Lady Djin

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 10, 2006 3:03 pm


Just to let you know I think most of my poetry sucks. So any advice would be greatly appreciated.
'kay here it is:


When you left you left me pain
You left me behind cold in the rain.
I was cast from your mind.
hoping you'd come back to help me.

My trust was betrayed
but still I stayed
a fool to keep on hoping.
PostPosted: Thu Aug 10, 2006 4:01 pm


i like it mrgreen
i think it's realy good 3nodding

thebeebop


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PostPosted: Sun Aug 13, 2006 9:03 am


Short, simple, and portrays enough emotion to get the point through.
Excelent!
PostPosted: Sun Aug 20, 2006 2:40 pm


i like...short..to the piont..i like

Willie-John[Abomination]

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