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Second one looks pretty damn good.
Art teacher yelled at me because i couldnt do that kind of style so great.
For the first one... all yeah really have ta do is erase some lines and finish the girls body/ outline of body.
Correct me if I'm wrong, but the girl is a ghost, and you're supposed to be able to see through her, right?
I think her butt jutts out a bit too far. I mean like.. how it suddenly curves from the back is awkward. If it didn't curve so severely, it'd look a bit better, like... more natural, I guess. Otherwise, it looks pretty good.
As for the second one, I adore it. Just blend the shading a bit.