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Shiro-Nami

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Posted: Tue Aug 08, 2006 1:59 pm

Gahh..,. just drew this for someone so i could get the pilots goggles!

Please critique and comment!

drawovers would be nice to (draw over the mistakes making them correct)

if you do drawover just post yours here on this thread!

kay thanks!

Edit- allrighty here is the fixed version... it looks much better!

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Posted: Tue Aug 08, 2006 2:23 pm

Nice lineart. biggrin

The only issue I see is the shape of the jaw/face doesn't really match with the eyes and the mouth. It looks a bit too long, I think. Here's what I mean:

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Shiro-Nami

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Posted: Tue Aug 08, 2006 2:45 pm

Tawney

Nice lineart. biggrin

The only issue I see is the shape of the jaw/face doesn't really match with the eyes and the mouth. It looks a bit too long, I think. Here's what I mean:

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Oh wow... that looks so much better!!!

Im gonna fix it... and give you 400 gold.. yes LOL you deserve it!

Posted: Tue Aug 08, 2006 3:31 pm

rofl heart

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Shiro-Nami

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Posted: Wed Aug 09, 2006 8:35 am

thanks it looks alot better now!

Posted: Wed Aug 09, 2006 4:26 pm

It's good.. Just plain. X[

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Shiro-Nami

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Posted: Thu Aug 10, 2006 7:51 am

Chase Keyhole

It's good.. Just plain. X[

I like plain! blaugh

Posted: Thu Aug 10, 2006 10:31 am

Ohh, I love pure black+whites with those little smudgerings of color.
They just look so clean.
Makes me happy.
:hearT:

It looks much better. Good job with the jawline. ^^

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Chase Keyhole

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Posted: Thu Aug 10, 2006 1:59 pm

Shiro-Nami

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It's good.. Just plain. X[

I like plain! blaugh

Then it's just good then. XP

If plain is what you like, it's what you do.

I didn't know if that was the desired outcome you wanted or not.

Posted: Thu Aug 17, 2006 12:43 pm

the hair over hte eyes kinda bugs me maybe give it a lil high lighting?

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