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Talon StarDrifter

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 07, 2006 5:24 pm




This is just a poem I wrote for my parents... In a few days, I'm going to a boarding school, and I won't see them for a while. I just wanted to know if the poem is any good. If you have a few constructive criticism or some nice reviews, I would love to hear them! Here's the poem...

Quote:

I am so scared;
I can't believe I'm leaving you.
Maybe I still have
some GROWING UP to do.

I feel like I'm leaving forever;
Do you feel that way too?
I guess we all have
some GROWING UP to do.

I'm leaving all my friends again;
Once more, I'll have to start anew.
It seems like I still have
some GROWING UP to do.

We haven't always gotten along;
that much is true.
Looks like we still have
some GROWING UP to do.

We'll certainly miss each other;
but, please, don't get too blue.
We will ALWAYS have time
for our CATCHING UP to do.


PostPosted: Wed Aug 09, 2006 12:38 am



I would love to hear your opinions on it... *hint*

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 09, 2006 6:58 am


It's simple, but I like it.
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