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 Posted: Mon Aug 07, 2006 1:09 pm
So I had entered this in a contest, but seeing as i didn't win, alluva a sudden i retained ownership of everything on this character except the tattoo and the name. tell me what you think, what i could have done better and overall i think this is a pretty decent self-introduction for me here. 
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Posted: Mon Aug 07, 2006 2:50 pm
Was this by any chance for WTF-chan's contest? surprised
I love every bit of it, from the clothing to the face (the hat especially).
But it's got to hurt a lot to have her head twist like that, without her shoulders moving at all. A bit of a mess on the anatomy, but otherwise, very nicely drawn.
<3
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Posted: Mon Aug 07, 2006 7:26 pm
I love all the little detail-bits.
All the guys on the hat/hair ties,
the bandaids,
the bracelet/ring chains and the skull zipper-bits.
heart
Beyond the neck/angle, I think her chest could use a little more definition to make it more breast-like on top slant.
Very cool. : D
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Posted: Tue Aug 08, 2006 7:59 am
Its much better than I usually do, thats for sure.
The detail is amazing. All the little accesories, the hair, the pattern on the scarf. Plus I love all the fuzzy animal heads on her hat, hair, and earrings. So cute. You can tell that a moderate amount of time at least was spent on this design. ^^
And I do agree with the people before me, the head is at an odd angle thats almost impossible without movement of shoulders (being the looser I am, I tried xDD). And the hand on the ground looks a bit... rushed? The third and fourth fingers are a bit pointy.
<33
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Posted: Tue Aug 08, 2006 11:23 am
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Posted: Tue Aug 08, 2006 11:57 am
Yep. this was for WTF-chan's contest and hey. thanks for actually posting constructive criticism! it's so rare that I get useful help.
also thanks chase for liking it too. XDD and thankfully i've taken an anatomy class now, so hopefully i'll stop breaking my character's necks.
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Posted: Tue Aug 08, 2006 12:20 pm
Very cool outfit. biggrin
I agree about her neck twisting a bit too much... if her body was turned a bit too, it'd look fine. But as it is, it just looks a bit uncomfortable. x3
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Posted: Tue Aug 08, 2006 1:09 pm
mahii also thanks chase for liking it too.
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