As always, his clothes are horribly cool. <33 Though I'm confused a bit with the checked-pattern.
You did a really nice job with the clouds in the background. They look, well, v. cloud-like. Which is what you were going for, I'm sure. xd
I am going to say that his eye's look a little high. Too close to the forehead, though I guess that's your style.
Nice job! heart