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 Posted: Wed Aug 02, 2006 10:46 am
Okay, this was a commission for Noir Kalenthiel, her OC Sier. I kept redoing the hair over and over again,
it was such a pain... but I enjoyed drawing this either way. ^^
So, please tell me what you think and criticize!!
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Posted: Wed Aug 02, 2006 12:00 pm
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This is gorgeous.
The outfit in particular is amazing.
It might be someone else's design, but you brought it to life.
She looks incredibly sophisticated, and I can't imagine how long it took you to create the patterns.
The only thing I can see that looks a little off is the size of her butt compared to the rest of her body. 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Aug 02, 2006 12:43 pm
Sign-up Free : D
This is gorgeous.
The outfit in particular is amazing.
It might be someone else's design, but you brought it to life.
She looks incredibly sophisticated, and I can't imagine how long it took you to create the patterns.
The only thing I can see that looks a little off is the size of her butt compared to the rest of her body. 3nodding
Ye, I noticed her a** was abit large, lol. But it's kinda too late too fix it.
Maybe she should stay away from lardo food for awhile.
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Posted: Wed Aug 02, 2006 1:01 pm
It's hard to resist those Krispy Kremes. D:
xd
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Posted: Wed Aug 02, 2006 5:55 pm
 The sleves are fricking amazing. You did a great job not making the dress plain, flat black. It is quite an intresting dessign.
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Posted: Wed Aug 02, 2006 6:15 pm
I don't like criticizing because I don't think I'm that great of an artist..
But I think she is well drawn, just her face is ugly.... x.x Meep.
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Posted: Wed Aug 02, 2006 6:38 pm
I think the way the hairline is so far back, and how the hairstyle is, makes her face jut out in front of her body. Maybe i'm imagining it, but it's kinda odd.
Also, i was kinda confused on the dress part. It shows her thigh when she raises it, giving the illusion that the dress is fairly tight... and even though it looks like her right thigh is touching the dress, when you look at the angle at with the knee is at, there is no way her thigh could twist and be up against the dress. So, maybe add a bit of fluidity to her dress by adding some crease and fold lines?
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Posted: Thu Aug 03, 2006 12:23 pm
Chase Keyhole I don't like criticizing because I don't think I'm that great of an artist..
But I think she is well drawn, just her face is ugly.... x.x Meep.
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Posted: Thu Aug 03, 2006 7:36 pm
Your amazing at drawing clothes. I love the lacey-type thinges on her wrists & skirt, and thats the most beautifly drawn mesh shirt I've ever seen. Your really detailed. and the hair looks famously.
The only critizim is that her head seems a little too small, and the adams apple is showingg ;p
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Posted: Fri Aug 04, 2006 12:23 pm
Juffie Eve Chase Keyhole I don't like criticizing because I don't think I'm that great of an artist..
But I think she is well drawn, just her face is ugly.... x.x Meep.
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Posted: Sat Aug 05, 2006 8:38 pm
Homg, it is very amazing. I love the hands, and the hair. They both are Fantabulous!! xd whee Everything is soo very detailed.
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Posted: Sun Aug 06, 2006 10:23 am
beautiful, but the face bothers me just a bit, but thats probably how its supposed to look, am I correct?
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Posted: Sun Aug 06, 2006 11:30 am
Stunning! It looks amazing, the shading is very well done, as is the coloring. The only thing that seems off is her right leg in the thigh area. Maybe it's just me. But good job!
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Posted: Sun Aug 06, 2006 1:43 pm
Wooooww. o__o
That's fricken awesome maanngggg.
The detail is just so intricate and smooth, the cuffs on the sleeves caught my attention as did the hair.
Nice job :]
(better than anything I could do xDDDDD)
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Posted: Mon Aug 07, 2006 4:59 am
freiflug beautiful, but the face bothers me just a bit, but thats probably how its supposed to look, am I correct?
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