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Valiant_Midnight

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 12:52 pm


(1)Elders
The wisest
the oldest
why are we told to listen to our elders
because they are wise?
because they have more experience
well how would their knowledge from the old ages help us now?
how will they explain to us how our new system works?

(2)Fighters
the ones that decide to fight
what do they fight for?
they fight for their beliefs,
some fight for freedom,
some fight for others,
and some even fight for nothing...
these are the fighters that we know...

(3)Loners
The ones that choose to be alone,
the ones that think they are either too good or too bad for the world
why do they think this?
why do they want to be soo alone?
maybe they just haventfound themselves.
and these are the loners.

(4)Choosers
the ones that choose what happens and what doesnt happen
they have a responsibility to do many things,
to decide peoples faiths,
everyone is a chooser
because everyone has something they have to choose from.
PostPosted: Thu Aug 24, 2006 2:14 pm


I don't like your poem about loners. It's not that accurate!

miyakoume


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PostPosted: Thu Sep 21, 2006 12:41 pm


miyakoume
I don't like your poem about loners. It's not that accurate!


How not??? What is it that makes //you// a loner, since you're such an expert? (I'm not trying to be rude, just curious)
PostPosted: Thu Jul 05, 2007 5:43 am


I agree with miyakoume about loners. You shouldnt generalize them as either thinking they are too good or too bad for the world. I'll admit that I am a loner the reason being (as said in your poem) that I havent quite found myself yet. But there are other reasons to be a loner. Some just like quiet and dont take to large crowds. Some are just shy. And thats not a bad thing


other than that, i liked this poem.

Miss_J_Lynn

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