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I would like some real tough critiquing here! this is for my latest commision Im working on... its the sketch... Im gonna begin coloring now!

What Im having toruble with the most is the arm on OUR left.. it would be his right arm I guess... it just doesnt look right to me!

OH if you want to red line this (going over the mistakes and correcting them using a red pen or pencil or using some other digital operation) That would be awesome! Just post them up here for me to see if you do!

Maybe you should define the lines of the neck becuse I can't really see any lines coming down from the head.
with the shoulders, maybe you just need to round them out?

Maybe at the bottom where the shirt ends and the pants begin, there could be some nice detail on the part of the pants we see.


^ The best I could do explaining visually ^