Sormani
The shading on the cheek bothers me. I think(and I might be wrong) that you were trying to add a gaunt look to the picture, but the shading is the same in that area, giving the impression that a chunk of his face was cut out.
Or maybe that's what you were trying to do. I dunno.
Heh, actually it's not shading, it's ... err...
Well you know how when you're reeeeally tired you get racoon eyes... and if you get even more tired, you start getting that darkness under the cheekbones... That's what it's sposed to be.
Thanks though, I do suppose I should have made it follow the facial structure a bit better to give it dimension instead of looking like a hole.