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broncogursky

PostPosted: Mon Jul 24, 2006 7:48 pm


This is a poem I wrote in about 10 minutes. I gave it to a good friend of mine for her graduation present. The poem also came with a little glass figure that you put on a stand and when you turn the stand on the light glows through the angel. That gave me the idea to write a poem. I think its a little elementary maybe. But the message was delievered and thats what matters I guess.. anyway without further adu.. haha

Light the stars in her sky,
And shine the sun on her face,
Guide and Protect her, no matter the place.

Keep her safe in your arms,
And warm in your heart,
What seems like the end, is only a start.

As you leave me behind,
Like the dust in your tracks,
I take a deep breath and then I relax.

For beside you in the seat,
And along in your stride,
I know a Guardian Angel is by your side.

Thats it comment. Like I said, it popped into my head fairly easily so if you recognize some parts...my bad.  
PostPosted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 11:51 am


it's pretty good. you've got talent if you thought that up in 10 min.

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broncogursky

PostPosted: Thu Aug 03, 2006 8:33 pm


thank you! and I did think it up in 10 lol because i just got home from getting the present and didnt want to be early to the party so i sat down, then it just slowly developed in my head. I usually dont get to write it down, but this time i made it haha. thanks again.
PostPosted: Mon Aug 07, 2006 1:47 pm


Very nice work. I'd like to read more of your poems and such. 3nodding

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broncogursky

PostPosted: Sat Aug 12, 2006 8:42 pm


ok when i write/ find more laying around my room and in random notebooks i will post them lol
PostPosted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 7:10 am


That's such a sweet poem, I hope your friend liked it smile

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Nephlym

PostPosted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 8:02 am


That's preety good. I just wished I had some talent like that.
PostPosted: Thu Sep 07, 2006 8:02 pm


yeah she did, i am glad to get all positive reviews, thank you all so much.

broncogursky

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