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 Posted: Sun Jul 23, 2006 9:31 pm
Plot:Roxas (still with the Organization) was dozing off during a meeting with the rest of the organization
Axel- *nudges Roxas* c'mon stay awake or Saix is gonna bust you
Roxas-*stretches and yawns* You worry to much
Scene:Roxas is walking down a long hall
Roxas- This takes so long to go to the frikin real world * brandishes two swords* Im totally craveing some sea salt ice cream
*Shadows appear on the floor...The two swords carried by Roxas turn into the keyblades Oathkeeper and Oblivion*
Roxas- What the hell are these?!?!...What the hell are those?!
* He runs toward the shadows and destroys one then destroys the last few by throwing the keyblades*
Axel-Holy s**t! You have been chosen to weild the Keyblade....You know whats going to happen now...
*Roxas, surprised, jerks his head up and stares at Axel*
Roxas- No...what?
Axel- Saix is going to take you to the boss and your going to be their new puppet.
Roxas- NO! Your wrong!!
*Runs away*
Roxas- *thinks* I must see Namine before anything happens
*Runs all the way up the lit stair and into Namine's Room*
Roxas- Namine you've got to help me!
*Namine slowly looks up at Roxas crying*
Roxas- Whats wrong?
Namine- I know whats going to happen and I cant help*sob* but..
*Roxas goes over to Namine and holds her in his arms*
Roxas- but I love you and I trust you..so what happens when you do whatever will save me?
Namine- *sob* You will live in a town and forget everything...you will live an average life
Roxas- Namine....please do it..I need your help
*Roxas kissed Namine, it was emotional and crap*
*Namine started the spell*
Namine- I will never forget you....we will meet again but you wont remember me... crying
The End
Stay Tuned for part 2 when I feel like making a part 2
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Posted: Tue Jul 25, 2006 4:37 pm
comments would be generous 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Sep 23, 2006 8:52 pm
I like it! Really romantic! More please ^.^
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Posted: Mon Oct 16, 2006 6:27 am
Cute!^_^ i liked how you can keep it general and not go into a whole lot of detail! lots a fanfic peeps do that and it annoys me till i scream "GET TO THE POINT ALREADY!!!" scream
but not you! you did good! blaugh
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Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 2:14 am
Quote: *Roxas kissed Namine, it was emotional and crap* WT--? crying
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 6:03 pm
emotional and crap?aw....oh well!
I always thought Roxas was the Emo...well...Zexion too.
ninja
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Posted: Fri May 04, 2007 9:18 pm
...I would love to be in Namine's place...
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