I like hearing things about how I can improve my work so spill the beans!
Posted: Tue Aug 01, 2006 3:47 pm
There's no perspective on the lower torso. I can't tell whether I'm supposed to look at her from an angle or straight down at her. She almost looks..... >_> decapitated without hands or legs to loosen the composition. Where is the light source may I ask? Also, you may want to put more details on the skirt. It looks abit flat. For clothing, you may want to look at references. They help alot. The skin color is great and the hair is nice. You need some light in her hair though. But overall, nice work.
Thanks...your right about the skirt x.x It does look flat >.>
Im always horrible with folds of cloths... crying it's my weakness.
Posted: Fri Aug 11, 2006 4:11 pm
try making it look as though there is pressure being applied to the bed...right now it kinda looks like she´s just floating. but i compliment you, they colour choice is beautiful.
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