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Rimbaum

PostPosted: Thu Jul 20, 2006 3:25 pm


Name: Sar Kashida
Age: Unknown (Mid to late 20s)
Height/Weight: 5'6"/150-ish pounds
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Hair/Eye Color: Black/Blue


Bio: Sar Kashida is a bad egg. Orphaned at an early age and raised by the good people in an obscure temple, Sar was everyone's worst nightmare. As a child, he played cruel and sometimes harmful pranks - these grew worse as he got older. By the time he was 16, he had already killed someone, and in his early 20s, he was sent to an underground prison.

It was in prison that things went even more downhill. Although Sar had excelled in magick while he was being raised, he chose to give it up, saying that it wasn't for him. Fate had a different plan in mind, because his cellmate was an old man with a book of forbidden knowledge - a book that taught shadowmancy to any mage.

This knowledge helped him climb up the prison's heirarchy, and eventually escape. However, he knew that he had to keep his abilities secret. Shadowmancers were widely believed by religious people to be the key to the end of the world--an antichrist, if we were to make a similar analogy.
PostPosted: Fri Jul 21, 2006 5:23 am


He does sound like an interesting character. 3nodding

Nicco Nightstar


Rimbaum

PostPosted: Mon Jul 24, 2006 11:53 am


Nicco Nightstar
He does sound like an interesting character. 3nodding
I couldn't do it last time I was online, but now I'm going to post up his initial appearance in the story. A nice little tidbit for the CAA, I hope. 3nodding
PostPosted: Mon Sep 11, 2006 11:00 am


Well, since it's Sar's appearance that signals the true unveiling of another character in TomK, I thought this would be the thread to put it in, rather than make a new one.

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Name: he doesn't REALLY have one, but I refer to him as Shadow Lyshev
Age: Older than time and still looking young xd
Appearance: Identical to Lyshev in every way, except for the fact that he dresses differntly
History: Known only as Tenispena (the evil shadow) in religion, Shadow Lyshev is released from an ancient spell by Sar, who also succeeds in helping to form a body made of shadow-stuff for him. He quietly bides his time, waiting for some trigger before, as he'd vowed once before to the Creator, he destroys everything in the universe.


Shadow Lyshev isn't really a bad or evil person. (SPOILER WARNING) It's just that, as the Creator's shadow and original companion, he wanted to make a "perfect" world for them to live in together, and didn't like what had already been made. (/Spoiler)

Lyshev Kirrith

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