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ohanakitten

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 16, 2006 10:18 pm


She was swept off her
And then she ran away
He lost his wife
She Found her true love
He stole her child
She lost part of her life
He raised the child
She was locked out of her life
He taught the child
She was left in the dark
He abused the child
She got a call one day
He made the child fightened
Her baby was dying
He stopped her from coming
She had to have her baby
He took the childs sharp things
She called her child every day
He made the childs choices
She started to be called mom
He pushed the child
She heard her childs cries
He made the child stay inside
She wondered what was happening
He abused the childs trust
She was helpless to do anything
He made his child keep silent
She heard her child crying
He took the child to the hospital
She heard nothing from her child
He blocked her from the childs phone list
She felt her childs needs
He kept the child alone
She came to see her child
He took the child home
She went back home without her child
He drove the child crazy
She got calls and pleas for help
He made his childs last decision
She made a few changes
He took that child in his arms
She took that child in her arms
"Baby you know I love you."
He watched the child walk away
She watched the child run to her
He now waits by the phone
She now watches carefully
The child they brought into this world
A child who understands...
That even though daddy raised her
Mom always was there first
That even though daddy taught her wrong
Mom will always be a guiding light
that even if daddy doesn't love her
Mom always will
And now she holds her child in her arms
And hears her daughter saying
"Mom I wish you were there to raise me,
Cause daddy made me sad,
he made me want to relocate,
so I put these voices in my head,
he made me want to hurt me,
So I tried to kill myself,
he made me feel like nothing,
so I don't love myself,
I'm sorry Mom i'm not perfect please
don't judge me like he did,
I'll do my best and if it won't work,
I'll do my best again."
He waits for the phone to ring
She won't dial the number
He waits for an e-mail
She blocked him from her list
He visits her favorite places
She finds a new username
He waits and wonders what he's done
She lives her new life with mom
If he saw her at this moment
He wouldn't recognize her
Daddy I'm a woman
Though I've been away a few months
I'm sorry i'm never coming home
I can't stand your sight
Tell my sisters and brother I love them
Give step mom my thanks
Don't forget you hurt me
Cause I can't It won't be
Goodnight mom I love you
I'll see you in the morning
Don't worry about my scars their healing
Like my feelings and heart
I won't think about him lest I have to
I won't see him in my dreams
After all he betrayed me
You cared after all
PostPosted: Mon Sep 25, 2006 7:56 pm


wow.

Tsuyoki-chan


ashinai

PostPosted: Fri Oct 13, 2006 11:49 am


Lovely, sad and long. +happy in between. (ashinai loves semi-sweet/sad endings. They make her sigh in contentment with the world's literature) heart
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