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 Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2005 5:07 pm
Ok, I got thinking one day & I thought of a story that should be am Inuyasha episode:
Naraku had stolen all of they jewel shards, Kagome had collected, so the gang was back 2 square 1. Even worse was that Kagome was feeling ill & had decided 2 go back home 4 a few days.
"I'm sorry, everbody. I wish you guys didn't have 2 wait on me." Kagome said apoligetically.
"It's fine, just be sure to get well." Sango said
"What she said" Inuyasha said
"Farewell, Kagome. Get well soon." They all said.
"Bye"
Kagome was in her room, her headache getting worse.
"Aahh!" Kagome screamed in pain
" Kagome what's wrong" Sota had heard her screaming. But his mom stopped him and told him not to go into her room. She just looked at the ground, she seemed sad.
Kagome tried to drone out her own screaming by putting her hands over her ears.
But she didn't feel her ears.
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Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2005 5:15 pm
Kagome went to the mirror to make sure that maybe her hands were not going numb or something. Suddenly her head ached so bad she blacked out.
When Kagome came to she was in front of the mirror, she looked at herself, she didn't fell any pain anymore.
There on the top of her head she saw a pair of ears.
"aaagghh" Kagome shreiked. Her mom ran into her room. Kagome, still kneeling on the floor turned to her mom.
Her mother started crying. "I knew this would happen." She closed the door and knelt down by Kagome.
"Mom, what's happening to me?" Kagome stuttered while crying.
Her mother looked away. "your father.... was not human" she said quitly.
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Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2005 5:30 pm
"what... I remember dad. He was human" Kagome spoke.
"He was in his human form." Kagome's mom spoke a little louder. "... before he died, he told me that you should never be allowed to go near the well, I didn't question him. This is why you were never allowed to go in that shrine. Now I know why, you were kept human because of the Shikon Jewel, didn't it ever strike you as odd I was never surprised about the demons or Inuyasha, your father sensed the jewel in you just as any other demon would have. He knew it would transport you through time, and you would not have the Jewel inside of you anymore."
"But Sota, he's not-"
"I know, Sota is human that I do not know why. You would have become human when you turned 16, but you were pulled down the well when you were 15." She countined. " You do not have the Jewel shards with you, do you. That is probably why you turned into a half-demon now. Because you don't have the jewel shards with you."
Kagome looked down at the ground, was this really true?
"But, I'll tell you this, there are demons with Jewel shards in this era to." She pulled out a jewel shard from her sleeve. "Here. To make you human."
Kagome inserted it into her skin. She looked normal. She got up, ran downstairs and out the door. She ran to the sacred tree and started crying.
Her mother watched from the door and cried as well.
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Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2005 5:31 pm
That sounds like a really good story idea. I like it.
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Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2005 5:33 pm
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Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2005 5:34 pm
Do does anyone have sugggestions or anything?
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Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2005 9:12 pm
I like should have put this in the fan fic section of this guild, but I didn't see it until after I posted my story.
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Posted: Tue Apr 26, 2005 12:51 pm
It's really good. Maybe you can write that when Kagome goes back to the feudal era, she looses the jewel shard during a battle and Inuyasha sees her with thoose ears..... That could be funny, because I don't think he ever saw a other dog-hanyou like him.
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Posted: Tue Apr 26, 2005 2:13 pm
Yeah, I'll probably add that
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Posted: Tue Apr 26, 2005 4:33 pm
Maybe you could put a little bit of Kagome's father's past into it.
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Posted: Tue Apr 26, 2005 4:40 pm
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Posted: Tue Apr 26, 2005 6:18 pm
ya its really good but i think it should go in the fan fics thread
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Posted: Fri Apr 29, 2005 3:39 pm
I really like it! you need to finish it!
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Posted: Fri Apr 29, 2005 10:30 pm
Hanyougirlie1 I really like it! you need to finish it! *Feels special*
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Posted: Thu May 19, 2005 7:01 pm
Ok.. if you go to the fan fic thing, you'll see the continuation of this story.
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