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Gabe Sadaph

 
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 24, 2004 3:43 pm


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JenniferStarling

 
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 04, 2004 12:54 pm


Quite good, although as a psych major all the freudian symbols kind of made it funnier for me than it should have been. You DO need paragraphs but the style itself is very fluid and literate.
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