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 Posted: Sat Jul 15, 2006 12:42 am
I decided to mess around with MSPaint and here are my results. I was planning on making his outfit a little more elaborate, but whatever idea I came up with, it turned out like crap. xD;; Uh. Crit away. There's plenty things to point out too. 
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Posted: Sat Jul 15, 2006 1:08 am
So I guess your looking for critique.
I'd do a draw over, but my mouse is being a huge b***h and it wont let me move it how I want.
So I'll have to decribe to you the odd parts.
I'll start from the head down. (:
the hair on his left side looks a little too flat, and the bangs remind me of spagetti.
The eyebows are good, I like em' very masculin, but the eyes seem a tiny bit pushed to our right.
His nose looks like a cat nose because of the shading it has, and that theres only one drawn crease from the nose to the upper lip when their is usually two for that little dip we all have there.
The face/Head seems alltogether too small, because the mouth practically reaches from one side to the other easily, but the mouth is the right size, the head needs to be bigger.
The that would maybe even out the size of the neck, and how long it is and thick at the top.
His left shoulder seems to start further from his body than it should, its almost as if it is disolcated.
His right shoulder, doesnt have much shape, no muscle nothing, when the other one does.
Kinda.
The Forearm, the only one you can see, seems too short, if the illusion is that his arm is hunch over in defense, and the forearm pulled back for 90 degree angel, the forearm should be a bit longer, and pulled up more.
Also the hand needs to be bigger, and it looks like his fingers are flat around the sword, 'cause they dont make much of a shape around the handle.
Thw torso is beautiful, (: I love it, and your folds.
But the crotch, what were you thinking?
You already know whats wrong with it, no need to point it out, correct.
Over all its pretty good.
'cause I know how hard MS paint is to use, 'cause thats what I use.
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Posted: Sat Jul 15, 2006 3:13 am
Lawl. The crotch.
"WTFH AM I DOING? IT'S TOO. GAHD."
Your point? Yeah, mine too. Hah, But thank you soo much.
I was suppose to erase around the nose, but I guess I forgot. xD
But thanks soo much for the crit. :]
MSPAINT FTW.
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