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Spinelle

PostPosted: Thu Jul 13, 2006 9:56 pm




ITS DONE.
You can click the links to check out what I started from, and then you can look at the finished one. Fun enough!?
ok.

Click for the orignal, before editing.
Finished sketch
Now shes been inked.

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 13, 2006 11:14 pm


I KNOW not everyone in the guild has the same time zone as me. So somebodys gotta be up.
Im sorry I have insomnia, and I should go to sleep.

Spinelle


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PostPosted: Thu Jul 13, 2006 11:53 pm


It looks fine to me, but I'm not the best at proportions sweatdrop

Are the Scouts' skirts really that short?

eek

And where's her left arm?

confused
PostPosted: Fri Jul 14, 2006 12:15 am


haha. It's one am here, but I'm willing to help.

I don't think she looks short. Really, she looks right to me. If anything her neck looks kinda short... ._.

But then again, I draw long necks. sweatdrop

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AmiimA

PostPosted: Fri Jul 14, 2006 4:12 am


I think her torso looks ok..
skirt is a bit short though. o.O
the feet look a tad (just a touch) too small.

razz haven't looked at sailor moon fainart in ages. brings back memories...
PostPosted: Fri Jul 14, 2006 6:31 am


Well, a normal person is about 7.5 headlengths tall... and if I'm guessing Sailor Moon would be about 8 tall 'cause she seemed to have very long legs in the series...

The body and legs look fine as they are, so you could just make the head a bit smaller.

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Apeiron King of Light

PostPosted: Fri Jul 14, 2006 8:05 am


true, as Tawney stated similarly, that if you just shrink the head a bit the piece would look great.

And, to me the torso looks fine and the thighs as well. I mean... if you actually intend to make it more "sailor moon-style", then I think almost everything on her body should be skinner and she should have slightly longer legs...
PostPosted: Fri Jul 14, 2006 9:41 am


[ Amputated Freckle ]
It looks fine to me, but I'm not the best at proportions sweatdrop

Are the Scouts' skirts really that short?

eek

And where's her left arm?

confused


Yah they really arm, and they have longer longs on the show. o_O
Her left arm is hidden behind her body/leg.

Spinelle


Spinelle

PostPosted: Fri Jul 14, 2006 9:45 am


Tawney
Well, a normal person is about 7.5 headlengths tall... and if I'm guessing Sailor Moon would be about 8 tall 'cause she seemed to have very long legs in the series...

The body and legs look fine as they are, so you could just make the head a bit smaller.


Ha, 7.5 headlengths, I've had my heights wrong for a pretty long time then. But Im short. Heh
I'll start making that head smaller.


Apeiron King of Light
true, as Tawney stated similarly, that if you just shrink the head a bit the piece would look great.

And, to me the torso looks fine and the thighs as well. I mean... if you actually intend to make it more "sailor moon-style", then I think almost everything on her body should be skinner and she should have slightly longer legs...


I dont really want it to be sailormoon style, I wanted a normal, healthy looking sailor moon. Not a 9 foot gaint with toothpick legs and a head thats too big for her skinny & long neck to support as they run in tiny high heels.

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 14, 2006 9:48 am


I remember those skirts.
I spent many a day wondering why my own weren't like that when I was littler.
XD

It's a bit shorter than normal, but it's not too-too much shorter. A couple extra inches and it would be perfect.
I mean, their skirts really are really short.

You've got her hair down pat. Those silly, silly meatball lumps. xd Gotta love them.

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Spinelle

PostPosted: Fri Jul 14, 2006 10:21 am


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I remember those skirts.
I spent many a day wondering why my own weren't like that when I was littler.
XD

It's a bit shorter than normal, but it's not too-too much shorter. A couple extra inches and it would be perfect.
I mean, their skirts really are really short.

You've got her hair down pat. Those silly, silly meatball lumps. xd Gotta love them.


HAH. Yah, I remember sitting there behing like, "why isnt my body like that, why cant i have a school uniform like that"
Their skirts, are sluttish-ly short. I went to go check a picture to see if its not just my imagination. And lookit this one;

Short skirt much?
PostPosted: Fri Jul 14, 2006 11:34 am


gonk

I retract my statement.
I think you're actually understating. XD

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Lish

PostPosted: Fri Jul 14, 2006 12:25 pm


This is why I don't draw on paper. XD Haha, alright, so.. It's my opinion that redrawing the whole head just to make it smaller is unecessarily difficult. Besides, I feel that the head and torso are in good proportion.

If you're looking for something to fix, I'd say it's the lower body. It might be just me, but I believe the legs could be longer. This might even out the proportions, and make her look more normal. In particular, I'd say it's the thighs. The length of the calves looks fine. Trying to picture where her crotch would be, I can't because it doesn't look like there's enough room.. The thighs would run right into her belly. I'd also like to point out the tiny size of her feet, that might also be throwing off your "realistic sailor" image. ^-^

So, in conclusion, the legs are much easier to redraw than the head.. Which, by the way, I think looks gorgeous. <3 You really did well with the hair. 0-0
PostPosted: Fri Jul 14, 2006 1:30 pm


it seems to me as though you're drawing details before really getting a good structute down.
i cant be sure though.
but i am sure that that arm is too thick for the rest of her body.

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helveticvnt

PostPosted: Fri Jul 14, 2006 2:02 pm


I think her height looks just fine. heart

I wish that her left knee didn't curve in so much. Thats the only thing that kind of bothers me.

good job. smile
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