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on a scale of 1- 10 what do you score?
  1 this sucks - me don't worry i'm not gonna kill meself if you mark here-
  3 I've read worst - yeah your being nice-
  5 I don't really care for it but I don't hate it either - did you really read this???-
  7 pretty good but I've read better
  9 I don't want to give you a ten so nah nah nah -me so??-
  10 I like a lot you are good -me now I know you didn't really read it cause this an't that good-
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 12, 2006 3:05 pm


Locked within four walls
the door hard as rock
my heart crumbling
my eyes shed streams
what is done is done
what will happen
is yet to come
will these walls keep me safe?
I fear they may topple
I've been hurt before
so now I'm scared
will I soon die?
I tear at myself
but carefully hide
the pain I've felt inside
my heart is hurt my mind is weak
my body trembles without relief
something to hold will not come
and I must remain within these walls
walls I've built around me
The key is lost as am I
I feel the end is near
No soul can feel me now
so I must move on.


Darkness shrouds my memories
I have lost my sanity
Now few ways seem right
i'm stuck at a fork inthe road
the last hill I climbed wrecked my name
the next may bring it back
but my heart cannot heal
not without leaving scars
I hear laughter at my sides
as air is pounded out
a pressure o my chest
makes me wish I were gone
Hope is as word no longer known
only one future
I'll never be able to grasp
What am I doing here
all reason for living is absent
for whom should I live now
so I must move on....


Love has found me again
but can it save me?
I know not and so I fear it
how will I survive if it fails
I felt this Love before
It's torn me limb from limb
Ans caste me to the side
Will it hurt me again?
Will it take it's revenge?
What is to become of me?
I will die eventually
But now that I know him
I never want to let go
One soul can hear me now
one soul can feel me
So must I move on?  
PostPosted: Wed Jul 12, 2006 8:13 pm


Wow, that was so dark, yet elegent at the same time, definate ten!

RIP IN PEACE RIP

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 23, 2006 1:56 pm


awwawawwwww
PostPosted: Fri Aug 25, 2006 10:59 am


i dunno its alright its just i dont know how to explain it its just i dunno its not a 10 or 9 but its not bad i just dont get any feeling when i read it nothing pops into mind like when i read osmething i want to like have it make me think about stuff and i liked it its just i didnt get the right fealing from it sorry otherwise its great wink

subzero13


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PostPosted: Mon Sep 11, 2006 8:50 pm


VainZiler
Wow, that was so dark, yet elegent at the same time, definate ten!
ditto *luffs it* heart heart *hands plate of cookies* Bravo!
PostPosted: Sat Sep 30, 2006 11:03 pm


I's beautiful!I quite adore it.Good job! biggrin

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