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Do Vampires Fall in Love?(pg-13-R)

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 6:26 pm


Rating:pg-13(i guess)
it's still not finished,but i hope soon will be.....it has romance, there's the language,violence,and the works....

leaving comments really encourages me to make more chappys so yeah just something to say! xd
PostPosted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 6:55 pm


Chapert 1-they don't exist!

*note that i took my own poll xd *

"I've been thinking Jeremy!",I said suddenly.

"Hmm...",was his response.

"Do vampires fall in love?", I asked him....we were only 5 then and niether of us understood the word "love."

"How should I know, Frankie?Besides they don't even exist!",he answered me with a question as he always does.

"Jeremy!Jeremy! Where the hell are you? Are you at Francien's again?",we heard his mom call out from the next door apartment.Both of us had a worried and scared look, and as Jeremy crawled out of the window and climbed to his own he whipered in fright. I stayed close to the window and heard screaming as my heart raced.

"What have I told you?! Why don't you ever ******** listen?!",I heard Jeremy's mom yell as I also heard a crash,and then Jeremy's crying....both of us were that night.I could never bear the fact that my only friend was being beaten nearly to death for the most insignificant things."Shut up!You worthless animal! Why did I ever have such a stupid boy?

There was no doubt in my mind that Jeremy was on the floor bleeding with scars from before all over his body curled up in a ball.I myself was too while looking out the window into the city's empty sky. I looked at the ally way and saw two strange men whispering to eachother and glancing at Jeremy's window from time to time.One with glasses and the other had short hair,but I never saw their faces.At my age back then I did not think anything of it.

The next day wasn't like all the others where people just pass by one another and not notice their very existance, drink thier ugly coffee, and work 'till they break just to earn some cash....oh,no...this one was very different...frightning and unexpected...very unusually yet vivid for me indeed...



hope you all liked the first chapter and the story so far! blaugh  

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 12, 2006 4:53 pm


sorry i'm not updating that much guys.
PostPosted: Tue Sep 12, 2006 6:17 pm


nice story so far mrgreen

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xdrifting.cookiex

PostPosted: Thu Sep 14, 2006 5:17 pm


Ch.2

That day was unlike any other. There were people in uniforms all over the place and
neighbors passing whispers and wearing shocked faces that only lasted for so long. Lines of yellow tape surrounded
the door to
enter Jeremy's apartment. I really didn't care about all the people in the hallway and outside, I didn't try looking for my mom and dad, all I was doing was running around everywhere waiting for Jeremy to pop out somewhere. When I went outside, I finally spotted Jeremy(which wasn't very easy let me tell ya!) He was sitting in the back of a white van that people call ambulances(i think....), looking down with bandages all over him, his head hanged over his shoulder with his black bangs covering his blue eyes.'Is he crying?', I thought as I approched him that day.

His head shot up suddenly,starteling me a bit, making me jump. 'Yep he's crying!',I shouted in my mind when I saw his watery eyes....freash tears running down his face, flowing against his pale skin. He sat there breathing hyperly, sniffing every moment, and having little fits to stop crying. He looked like such a mess, like his mom. "J-Jeremy....what happened?"

He was calm as anyone can be when they cried but when he started talking to me he couldn't hold himself back anylonger,"M-my mom, s-she's...I*gasp* she was gonna hit m-me again, b-but some guy came through t-the window.......and..and she..and he
grabbed my mom and threw her across the r-room.", it
took a while for him to tell me everything that happened."I d-d-don't know what h-he did to my mom 'c-cause he th-threw me i-i-into the closet.", the second he finished he jumped off and hugged me tight. I was a little freaked out at first since I had never hugged anyone befor, but after a while I hugged him back. "I-I don't want that t-t-to happen to you.", he said. Right now, I was happy that Jeremy's mom was dead, but I was so angry that she had caused him so much pain. I hated her with everything I was, because Jeremy was my only friend in the world, and the only person who cared about me.
PostPosted: Sat Sep 16, 2006 1:17 pm


This is really really good. i want more!

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Switchblade Saint

PostPosted: Wed Oct 04, 2006 7:54 pm


Aaaah, i hate cliff hangers surprised
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