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Kit ~ Invader of Dreams

PostPosted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 11:26 pm


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Aaand then a comic that i doodled up. Sorry, there's some swearing.. but just a bit. :3
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My gallery: kitfox247.deviantart.com
PostPosted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 4:53 am


lol'd. I like the comic. XP So kawaii. heart

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Tawney
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 8:27 am


Those are pretty cute. whee heart

One thing I noticed... I'm finding it hard to tell the difference between the male and females, especially in that big group shot. Their bodies all look the same... I'm not sure if that was what you were going for, but I think it'd look a lot nicer if you gave the females a bit more of a curvey shape. Much wider hips would definitely help.

The legs could also use a bit of work. Once again I'm not sure if you intended them to be like... humans in animal fur, or more just upright animals. But right now their legs are straight lines without any real form.

If you're leaning more towards animal-like legs...

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Notice how the upper part of the leg is quite wider, and there's a bend below. You could try transferring the same idea to an upright position. Actually, if you saw the most-recent Harry Potter movie (I think it was the last one, anyway...) where Lupin transforms into a werewolf, you can see a good example of how a mammal's legs would look standing upright.

If you want more human-like legs...

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(Sorry for the lack of better pictures. XD)
Something your pictures are definitely lacking are knees. Also, the shape of the legs is pretty much non-existant. sweatdrop The upper part of the legs is the widest, then the leg narrows at the knee. Below the knee is the calf (that long protruding muscle at the back of the lower leg), which your figures also lack.

So either way, work on those legs! whee

Sorry for the huge amount of text. rofl
PostPosted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 3:34 pm


Tawney
Those are pretty cute. whee heart

One thing I noticed... I'm finding it hard to tell the difference between the male and females, especially in that big group shot. Their bodies all look the same... I'm not sure if that was what you were going for, but I think it'd look a lot nicer if you gave the females a bit more of a curvey shape. Much wider hips would definitely help. .....


Usually in my art, if it's a girl, i'll give them eye lashes, and if it's a boy i wont. If it's a very 'girlish' boy, then i'll only give them front eyelashes, but i'm kinda breaking that habit because it gets a little confusing to those who dont know my characters very well..

Yes... i'm not much used to human form as much as i am with animal form. They're Zafaras from Neopets, and they're normally sort of 'up right' in the first place. The way i ran out of room at the bottom kinda failed to show how i do their feet... I'm rather out of practice with drawing these six, and it was just a sketch so i could see if i still remembered how to draw them/ what their colors were. Those are a lot of legs so i got bored and just kinda... put them there, haha. So i do know that they're a little awkward. Thank you for the reference pictures, though the first one doesnt work so i dont know what you were trying to point out to me. D:

Thankyou for the advice, and i like longer comments.. so there's no need to appologize for that. x3

Kit ~ Invader of Dreams


Kit ~ Invader of Dreams

PostPosted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 3:36 pm


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lol'd. I like the comic. XP So kawaii. heart


xD Thanks!
PostPosted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 4:11 pm


Kit ~ Invader of Dreams
Tawney
Those are pretty cute. whee heart

One thing I noticed... I'm finding it hard to tell the difference between the male and females, especially in that big group shot. Their bodies all look the same... I'm not sure if that was what you were going for, but I think it'd look a lot nicer if you gave the females a bit more of a curvey shape. Much wider hips would definitely help. .....


Usually in my art, if it's a girl, i'll give them eye lashes, and if it's a boy i wont. If it's a very 'girlish' boy, then i'll only give them front eyelashes, but i'm kinda breaking that habit because it gets a little confusing to those who dont know my characters very well..

Yes... i'm not much used to human form as much as i am with animal form. They're Zafaras from Neopets, and they're normally sort of 'up right' in the first place. The way i ran out of room at the bottom kinda failed to show how i do their feet... I'm rather out of practice with drawing these six, and it was just a sketch so i could see if i still remembered how to draw them/ what their colors were. Those are a lot of legs so i got bored and just kinda... put them there, haha. So i do know that they're a little awkward. Thank you for the reference pictures, though the first one doesnt work so i dont know what you were trying to point out to me. D:

Thankyou for the advice, and i like longer comments.. so there's no need to appologize for that. x3


Ah, well the first picture was just a picture of a fox. I'm sure you could find one easily anywhere... XD

Tawney
Captain

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