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can't think of much to stay, initially my reaction wa, it looks good. Coloring is soft and nice, and i guess form looks well enough defined.

I sort of wish the lineart was a bit crisper or bolder, in the more detailed areas of the robotics, you sort of get lost in all those little lines..it's going to either need some really sharp coloring or better lines to get each piece to pop.

Other than that, this sort of side view static pose always looks sort of weird to me.