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 Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 9:39 pm
 Yeah. I know it sucks, but please don't flame. Just tell me on improvements. (Which will be alot, lol)
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Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 11:53 am
xd Actually, it's pretty good.
Pros
[x] Detail and texture is good
[x] Expressions are good
[x] Hands are good(!). Usually hands suck, when I draw them, so those are good
Cons
[x] Neck should take up roughly 1/3 of the shoulders
[x] Though male figures aren't very curvy at all, muscles stick out (in this case), so teh shoulders in this on should be more curved. The top looks like a muscle-ate box.
[x] When standing in that pose, the arms shouldn't really cover the chest much. Their width is good, but the extra curve I mentioned earlier will help show more of the chest. It looks squished up.
Overall
[x] I don't know what to say about feet. personally, I can't draw feet at all, but they could be improved.
[x] Depending on how strong the light behind him is, the shadow will either blend more into the ground (dull light), or it will stand out like a sihlouette(sp?) outline on the ground (strong light). Also, remember that when drawing a full shadow of a person, it should appear a little squashed and flat.
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Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 3:35 pm
Alright. My brother told me that the neck was small but I denied it. So then you told me, so now I'll believe iut. Thank you.
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Posted: Sat Oct 27, 2007 1:51 pm
It is very good. Just needs some improvement. Don't be mad at me. crying crying crying
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Posted: Tue Mar 11, 2008 12:17 pm
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Posted: Tue Mar 11, 2008 12:19 pm
P.S. No pic is worthless... wink
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