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 Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 4:00 pm
All day as I watch whip with your rose whip it gives me chills
I dare you please whip me with it and seduce me
I wait until the sun has passed so we may quietly go into your den
And see what awaits us in the magic hour
Your eyes meet mine and we know it's time for enother rough day
With Yusuke and that bone head Kuwabara
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Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 4:07 pm
Wow just like a haiku only longer! Excellent! I look foward into reading more!!! 3nodding
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Posted: Sun Jul 23, 2006 8:25 pm
That was great! biggrin Keep up the great writing!
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Posted: Mon Jul 24, 2006 1:21 am
I like it! 3nodding It is very good, and feels honest.
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Posted: Tue Aug 01, 2006 12:21 pm
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