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Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 3:59 pm
My story is being re written but I got down with the first part and it has more detail and more saddness yet more excitement! Enjoy!
Casey has always hated herself and was shy because she lacked confidence in herself. She has always been the girl in the way back staring out of the window sitting alone. Casey always wore a black zip up sweater and dark, blue jeans. Her skin is pale and when she blushes everyone can see. Her hair was cut to the lobe of her ear and had bangs covering her hazel eyes. When someone would come up to her she would look away and twiddle her pointer fingers. Casey would hold her arms up to her chest creating a barrier between everyone around her. Her voice was soft and quiet making it hard for her to be heard since she never talks to people. She would never smile at anyone except her teacher when no one was around. Her older brother Chris was one of the popular kids in her school and was one of the top martial art students. Casey took martial arts without a choice. Chris and Casey had to take martial arts because of their father made them. Casey was somewhat good at martial arts but could never beat anyone because she would loose confidence in herself and quit. It embarrassed her whole family to have a quitter and a loser in their family line. She made a decision to try to change herself but gave up. Around fourth grade she saw someone who caught her eye. He was a new kid at her school who seemed alone like her. He had black hair and hazel eyes like her. He looked angelic in some way. He was wearing an Iron Maiden t-shirt with blue jeans. He walked next to the teacher’s desk and gave Ms. Morris a sheet of paper. He looked up and gave a quick glance around the room with everyone looking down at their papers. He saw Casey looking at him so he focused on her. Casey looked away and started twiddling her pointer fingers. He shrugged it off and looked back at the teacher.
“Class we have a new student today, his name is Gerard Way. I hope you all will give him a warm welcome to him. You can have a seat next to Casey Anderson.” Ms. Morris said.
“Which one is Casey Anderson?” Gerard said looking around the classroom.
“Casey?” Ms. Morris said.
“Y-yes?!” Casey said widening her eyes and throwing her hand on the desk.
“That one is Casey.” Ms. Morris pointed.
“Thanks.” Gerard said walking towards the desk next to Casey. Casey’s heartbeat ran fast with every step he took towards her. Casey held up her arms to her chest and put her pointer finger on her lips as she looked away. Gerard looked at her and then to the desk. He said down and looked at Casey at the corner of his eye. “Strange.” Gerard said in his head. Gerard took out his notebook and started drawing a picture. Casey slowly looked back at him. She looked down at his paper and noticed him drawing.
“What is he drawing?” Casey said in her head removing her pointer finger away from her lips. Casey sat up in the desk and watched him draw. Gerard started to look up from the paper. Casey looked away blushing a little. Gerard looked over at her seeing her move as he looked up.
“Was she watching me? She’s strange.” Gerard looked back down but his eyes haven’t moved from Casey. Casey looked out the window and then down at her paper.
“Did he see me? I hope not. Is he thinking I’m weird? He probably is! I always am! Why do I have to be this way?” Casey thought to herself. The bell rang and everybody started to get up. Casey grabbed her book bag and left the class. Gerard got up and started walking towards the door. He shoved his book back into the bag and left to his next class which was his worst class. Math was Gerard’s worst subject because he could never figure out the problems and would get an F. He found his class and looked towards the back of the class to see Casey sitting next to the window. Gerard walked over to a seat in the front row. Casey looked away from the outside trees and saw Gerard sit down. Casey’s heart started beating faster again. Just knowing he is in this class made Casey extra nervous just doing anything.
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Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 4:13 pm
From reading your story I hope it turns out good. It is a really good story for your first one hope to see more of it.
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Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 7:23 pm
Who do you think called her name? I wanted to know everyone's thought before I post the second chapter.
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Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 7:31 pm
I think Gerard did it seems the most posible.
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Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 7:36 pm
Oh thanks for the comment earlier! mrgreen
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Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 7:43 pm
no prob i just love fanfics or even bandfics.
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Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 8:11 pm
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Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 9:55 am
Wow I was wrong but explaining why she is always like that helps keep wrighting
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Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 10:15 am
((still being re written))
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Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 2:43 pm
tottaly awsome story. biggrin
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Posted: Sat Jul 08, 2006 10:46 am
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Posted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 2:25 pm
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Posted: Wed Jul 12, 2006 11:49 am
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Posted: Sat Jul 29, 2006 4:59 pm
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Posted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 9:39 am
5 years later....... AHH I wanna know what happens next!!!
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