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Ritz_Freak

PostPosted: Tue Jun 27, 2006 1:01 pm


Is this really love?
My best friend
My other half
I have nothing to offer
you trust me
Somehow you don't care
Somehow, you make it all go away
At least for a while.
Now your gone
And I say to myself
What's the point?
PostPosted: Tue Jun 27, 2006 9:29 pm


Incorrect use of "your".

Colloquialism on final line.

Trite.

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Ritz_Freak

PostPosted: Wed Aug 23, 2006 1:09 pm


godzilladoxy
Incorrect use of "your".

Colloquialism on final line.

Trite.
eek Huh?
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