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 Posted: Sat Jun 24, 2006 10:28 am
Ok, so critique's are welcome on stories, but once I show a poem, it is done. I don't revise my poetry, just a quirk I have. So I welcome advice for future works, but I still reserve the right to question anything you say about my work.
Thank you ahead of time for looking at my writings, and even more love for taking the time to comment.
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Afterglow
Through the distance between us
Closeness is obtained by
relaxing in the
silence we have created
Voices create arms, hands,
lips
Caressing, soothing, stroking
with our hearts
Passion is a timeless thing
Knowing no stretch of land
Too great, it can engulf the moon
It sparks between us everything
Catching fire
An obesessive burning
of a Lover's Flame
The need sates,
never exaggerates
our seperation,
only confirms our
truest thought,
We are One
This is ours to have
We alone know the
Way to this World
We hold between us
the only key
It is secret
It is ours
It is Love.
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Posted: Sat Jun 24, 2006 10:29 am
Liar.
I like to lie.
It keeps me company
my blanket of falsity
I am honest in my lies
when so many believe
their own putrid words
I kill a lot.
Death done to
little peices of myself,
the carcasses pile in my brain
rotting, broken things
that distract me,
make me dizzy and lost
The things I do
inside of me
keep me from
who I want to be
The things I feel
itch my eyes
Im so busy scratching
I ignore my cries
Someday, when I control me
When I am no longer a puppet
Maybe I will stop
the sins of self
Maybe there will be
somebody with help
But I doubt it
So either I keep on the strings
Or I cut myself loose
And fly or fall
I am in control.
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Posted: Sat Jun 24, 2006 10:30 am
My Smile Cracked ((My personal favorite <3))
My smile cracked
I tried to hide it
But whenever I spoke
little peices of my face
my facade
fell away
And I dreamed
Dreamed of waking
as someone else
Losing my self in the void
no longer an 'I'
lost in the space between atoms
Or
I could ease away
never wake
Be laid like Snow White
Sleeping Beauty
a myth of Femininity
A Legend of Loveliness
Held High and cast low
Something molded into
perfection
Before rigour set in
And I am shot through
with steel
Resolution
Autonomous
Automatic
Am a robot
With one goal
I have tried so long
The facade is all I have
They tried to fix me
One I ended up
comforting and dismissing
One I hide my most
private self from
One I have no
no right to, ever
One I never wanted
but forced myself to use
And I saw all this
as I looked in my Mirror
when my smile cracked
And I tried to hide it.
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