Butterfly
She was poised with her dagger in both of her hands, ready to attack; her blood was frozen in her veins. All time seem to have ceased in this very moment as she thrust the dagger down into her victims chest. She was ready for his blood to splatter all over her, and she wanted it. She lusted after it; after his death. All of her animosity for this pathetic excuse for a living creature was pushed into this single act; the act that would end his life and finally set her daughter and son free. They would finally be able to live out their lives in peace, and not fear that they would be killed in their sleep. They would finally be safe. Only inches away now. Faster! Faster! Her brain screamed at her. We have to save them here, and now. The seconds lengthened as she drew closer. Almost there, and then-.
,”Ooohhh, butterfly!”
Her eyes followed the orange and yellow butterfly that flew a few yards away. She dropped her dagger, and ran after it with the innocence, and playfulness of a child.
oh, and everyone, quick note from the author: if you say it can use work, could you tell me what kind of work? what's wrong with it? what do you think i should change?
She was poised with her dagger in both of her hands, ready to attack; her blood was frozen in her veins. All time seem to have ceased in this very moment as she thrust the dagger down into her victims chest. She was ready for his blood to splatter all over her, and she wanted it. She lusted after it; after his death. All of her animosity for this pathetic excuse for a living creature was pushed into this single act; the act that would end his life and finally set her daughter and son free. They would finally be able to live out their lives in peace, and not fear that they would be killed in their sleep. They would finally be safe. Only inches away now. Faster! Faster! Her brain screamed at her. We have to save them here, and now. The seconds lengthened as she drew closer. Almost there, and then-.
,”Ooohhh, butterfly!”
Her eyes followed the orange and yellow butterfly that flew a few yards away. She dropped her dagger, and ran after it with the innocence, and playfulness of a child.
oh, and everyone, quick note from the author: if you say it can use work, could you tell me what kind of work? what's wrong with it? what do you think i should change?
