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 Posted: Tue Apr 12, 2005 11:29 pm
This is our personal little poetry corner. Come, share your works with friends (who will be reviewing your works!). So... let us set some rules:
1. All reviews for poems are to be PMed, not posted or quoted.
2. If an author wants, he/she may post the reviews by quoting their own poem, then stating who sent the review at the bottom. No more then three reviews per poem may be posted by author for each poem
3. no flamming, in other words, be nice, or at least constructive
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Posted: Thu Apr 14, 2005 8:41 am
Forgotten angel
Alone in silence
Resting in peace
With choas at his door
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Posted: Thu Apr 14, 2005 8:01 pm
A beautiful sword so freshly wrought.
Clean steel blade shines proudly in the sun.
Razor edge so sharp and dangerous.
A bloody sword so freshly fought.
Filthy steel blade glints dully in the sun.
Blunt edge so dull and weak.
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Posted: Fri Apr 15, 2005 8:39 am
dreaming sweetly
softly wrapped in your embrace
i want to feel this way forever
hold on
hateful morn approaches
you hold me no more
the dream has withered
~2002
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Posted: Fri Apr 15, 2005 8:43 am
tender heart
she waits
will love lie with her tonight
in dreaming only does he appear
sweet night
as close as forever
the moon is a glow
a glimmer in the dark
softly whispers the wind
she shall allways wait
~2002
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Posted: Fri Apr 15, 2005 10:26 am
Cold and forgotten.
Standing alone.
No one beside me.
Wishing to be remembered,
To no longer be alone.
Nothing but a whisper,
Of what once was.
To only be a wisp,
In someone's thoughts.
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Posted: Fri Apr 15, 2005 10:29 am
The sand is moving
Watch as it falls
Gentle and smooth
And fluently it pours
Beautiful it seems
As the sand falls threw the hourglass
People move threw life
Beautiful it seems
But what happens when the sand runs out
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Posted: Fri Apr 15, 2005 10:45 am
k..so this is, like, completely random, thrown-together stuff that i did just because i felt like using this new rhyming scheme and i was really, really bored. have fun, but it aint exactly bouncy...
trees sighing
wind dying
dusk is coming close.
moon glowing
fear flowing
the pressing darkness grows.
hope falling
voices calling
despair is knocking at the door.
the path glows
the pain shows
and makes it hurt all the more.
black all around
stars unfound
let's put on all our disguises,
the clouds moan
feeling alone
but the sun also rises.
<"However long the night, the dawn will break."
--African Proverb>
--Madison
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Posted: Tue Apr 19, 2005 1:17 pm
I have lost my wing,
falling into the abyss,
wanting to be found.
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Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2005 6:22 pm
oh, the dawning sun
warming the desolated land
inside my cold heart
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Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2005 6:45 pm
a lost little child
scared and in the dark
lonely long hours
promises broken
hearts shattered
just a lost little child
~2001
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Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2005 6:49 pm
life is pain
and pain consumes all life
sadness is infectious
snearing at bitter cold
chills of forgotten loves
empty walls whisper secrets
painful memories are never striken
hollows never heal
let me not know pain
beautious rest come upon me
bite at my flesh
rip at my heart
be rid of me
~2002
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Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2005 6:52 pm
the mermaid, she dances
waves ripple above
lonely she calls
love of the water has she
once for a time
the love of a mortal boy
he came to dance
dance with a mermaid
along the waves of the sea
returned has he, to his world above
with him has he taken love
the love of a dancing mermaid
forever cursed to dance in the sea
the mermaid, she dances
salt water made so by her salt tears
the mermaid, lost her love has she
~2003
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Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2005 6:58 pm
miss me
do you ever think of me
i stay up all hours crying
it's all on you
i've got to be good
be strong
don't wave
don't break
you left me here
nothing i can do to hide the tears
lost in this thing they call reality
i just want to leave
i just want to go
be somebody who's not me
i'm not safe anymore
my mind isn't a sanctuary anymore
i just don't understand
and i never will
why we lose all we care for
do you still miss me
you can't
i'm not here anymore
the baby is grown
and i've got nowhere to turn
~2002
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Posted: Tue Apr 26, 2005 5:22 pm
It's the purest kiss
As soft as velvet
As warm as you
It seems to last forever
Full of passion
I burn with lust
Wanting it to never ends
Because it's the purest kind of kiss
A kiss from the heavens
A kiss from you
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