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Posted: Tue Apr 12, 2005 8:28 pm
Catgirls they have stolen our hearts no matter what type. from the Adventurous Tiger that will attack anyone who harms their friends to the cute little Kitten girl who's greatest worry is getting tangled in the Yarn ball or really whatever form. no matter how into Anime or Manga you are whether simply moderate or Raging Otaku everyone knows what a Cat girl is. they have the Agility and love for fishies of a Cat and the Reasoning of a human. they are the Tuna Raiders and Yarn ball Wrestlers of the Anime World. and of course with such powerhouse beings there will always be stories. this is the story of one such Neko that will simply be called Yuri.
Special thanks to: Rednal for his story Golden which helped give me the Idea of this one. to Derangedman (now called Rokkr) for telling me to do what I love: Writing. and to Yuri for being my favorite little Neko.
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Posted: Tue Apr 12, 2005 8:38 pm
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Posted: Tue Apr 12, 2005 9:07 pm
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Posted: Tue Apr 12, 2005 9:47 pm
II: Maternal Guilt Case File: The Fenrir Project: 3rd attempt Subject: Yuri 111889 Explanation:Yuri 111889 is thus far showing normal human growth rate in Human and Semi-human form in cat formYuri 11889 seems to only be out of kitten years. evidently age is slower and relative to human age as opposed to Cat age. Yuri 111889 is so far Docile and obedient (with an occasional mishap) as for physical enhancements the various drugs so far have been a success in enhancing Yuri's 111889's Agility and strength which is shown in her 11889's latest attempt to escape by the Ventilation system. Communication is an issue as Yuri 11889 seems to prefer silence and Cat-talk (body language gestures and of course meowing). it is clear that Yuri 11889...
A tear splattered onto the longhand writing. Takano put down the pencil and sat back hunched over weeping. it isn't fair what they intend to do to her...it isn't fair at all. someone knocked on the door. "Who is there?" Takano asked "the old coot." a rough eastern European accent responded " Dr. Krovankan i can't talk right now. I have a lot of filing to do." Takano said fighting back tears. the door opened and a very concerned Krovankan stepped in. one look at Takano's tearstained face told him all he needed to know. "it was those damned guards again wasn't it." Dr. Krovankan raged "the people they hire to handle security are incompetent." he Raved "yes!" he said yelling to the Camera "Incompetent Violent and far too.." " Dr. Krovankan it wasn't the guards." Takano said. "...what is it then Melissa?" Dr. Krovankan asked Takano "nothing i was just doing a report on Yuri's progress so far and. was reminded what they.." she stopped short then started again. "what they would do to..." she stopped again tears forming? what they would do to my little girl..." she sobbed and fell into Krovankan's old arms.
200 miles away from the complex A cat girl a black one sat in a tree by the camp brooding. a young man walked over to the Cat girl in the trees a sour look on his face. "Hey Torayou cmon get outta that tree we have work." he yelled "we need to load up the jeep and get the ammunition ready and..." "..we have time Mark." Torayou responded. she sat and pondered the journey, the danger and always like her the reward. ((Discussion over though sadly no one responded when i put it up))
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Posted: Thu Apr 14, 2005 5:50 pm
Chapter III ROWWL! groups of Rebel Forces that Aim to bring down the Konekoan section of the Mercadian Republic and replace it with their own. the war thus far has been a Guerilla War. people are slaughtering eachother in the middle of the woods, bodies are being Desscrated and people living in small Townships and Hamlets are being Raided and Raped by overzealous Guerilla's, the Republic Soldiers are having trouble getting to the smaller more mobile Guerilla's and Therefore returned to the Research started before Konekopia was Conquered. from this a lycantherope known only as Fenrir was made, Fenrir with his Wolflike Senses and Instinct coupled with a human Reasoning was the perfect Fighter, but not the perfect Soldier sadly for the Republic. Fenrir hated his creator Timothy Krovankan [Grandfather to Dr. Jonathon Krovankan] with a passion and (it seemed) Everything. the problem was that Fenrir had no loyalty to anyone it seemed. this became apparent at one Routine Enhancer Injection Fenrir broke out and went on a rampage Killing Tim Krovankan and almost killing his son (he did however manage to Damage Jonathon which is why he now walks with a Cane) before dying. How Fenrir died is impossible to know as the entire Complex was slaughtered aside from the Unconscious Jonathon Krovankan. but there are three main beliefs the first one being Genetic Breakdown (Some Theorists even believe this to be the Reason why Fenrir was so Violent) others believe he died of Blood loss after all Security cameras show Fenrir clearly being shot with High Powered Rifle yet continuing on. all theories Aside despite being a Failure Fenrir was the first of the Animal Soldiers to be made, so it is no suprise that a few years later a Second attempt was made, this one with a Panther that was called To...
"ROWL!!!" Yuri yowled as she ran on the Treadmill. it was moving at a great speed and Mama was running it longer than Usual. it was the average thing for Yuri to run on it for a around 15 minutes at high speeds but Mama had been reading a history book and almost forgot about her. Takano looked up from behind the one way mirror, and slammed on the button that stopped the Treadmill. when it stopped Yuri collasped her eyes wide open and breathing raggedly. "oh Yuri!" Takano sighed as she ran into the training room where Yuri had just run an uneeded Gauntlet "Mommy's sorry Yuri Mommy's just been out of it she's so so sorry." Yuri responded with a less than complimentary "rowl..." but was too tired to actually say anything. Takano smiled and told Yuri to Turn to a cat so she could carry her to back to her Cell. Yuri-tired as she was-complied. Takano spoke to her asking again and again for Yuri to forgive her. but though she never said it in her heart it wasn't just to forgive running Yuri to exhaustion. she also wanted to be forgiven by Yuri (because she could never Forgive herself) because Takano would never forgive herself for making her so sweet so nice and making it so hard to give up to the Millitary when they came for her. Takano would never forgive herself. Never
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Posted: Sun Apr 17, 2005 12:35 pm
IV:Far Too At Ease Torayou walked back to 'camp' an odd name since the camp was a recently abandoned ghost town. it must've been a small town before the war began probably used as a trading post as the safehouses and such were filled with Firearms,Food,Water and to the delight of some of the soldiers alcohol. Torayou noticed this all as she walked through the camp of Innebraited Rebels. Idiots. what if someone were to attack. Torayou never understood the short-sightedness of humans, it would get them all killed someday... she walked into a tent with a sign reading CAPTAIN'S QUARTERS "Request to enter Capn. Marex." she said "At ease soldier." said Captain Kemen R. Marax. Kemen was an averaged size man with jet black hair light brown eyes (left one Scarred) and looked more like a Teenage Biker than a Captain of any sort, covering the black hair with a Camo Bandanna and wearing the Fatigues that were in some places threadbare, although in an odd way it made sense that he wasn't like most captains, with their medels and their haughty attitude that usually got them a bullet in the head, Kemen though and odd man made for a greater Captain than anything the Republic Army could ever bring around. although he was (as the bottle of Jack Daniels he was holding as he was mulling over some maps signified) only human "Lt. Torayou." "sir." "I already said at ease Torayou." "sorry,sir" Kemen chuckled a little "so Torayou what is it you came here to talk about?" he said leering for seemingly no reason at all. "The men are..." "..drunker than hell an' prolly as horny." Torayou nodded it was true several of the men were in fact breaking protocal by taking some of the Female captives out for a 'rock around'. the Captain Sighed. "you get a bunch of idiots take some nice looking women add Alcohol and ..." Torayou offered "sometimes the women don't even have to look good..or even be women." Captain Kemen said walking outside carrying a kettle and a metel Mixing spoon. he beat at it in the soldiers tent. then threw it inside hitting one of the men and knocking them unconcious. the reamainder of them ran out many of them jumping up from their stripped bound and gagged companions beforehand. "ALL RIGHT YOU PACK OF DRUNKASS RETARDS!!" Kemen yelled he proceded to denounce every single one of them as two faced ******** retards, Shitbrained horned dogs, half assed idiots and using quite possibly the most creative swearing any of them had ever heard. Torayou who was taking it from a vantage point watched all of this laughing somewhat. Humans... she thought
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Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2005 7:48 am
good job so far I hope to read more soon
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Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2005 2:54 pm
V:God have Mercy Yuri walked around her cell sniffing around in half cat form has to be a way out... she circled the perimeter of the room again, well the was no chance that she could try the door it was air locked,the Vents were too small even for her cat form to squeeze in, the once simple Bar cell was now Glass with small Breathing holes and there was no way at all to get out.. ..wait a second She smiled a silly catlike smile * * * "I think the important thing in all of this is the success we've had, So far Yuri has been realitivly well behaved, and so far no one has been Injured." General Yamato (Captain of the Guard) looked derersively at the comment that Takano (because she was a woman) had made. "she doesn't know how to fight." he stated Flatly Brilliant General Takano thought to herself. Takano was about to respond when Dr Krovankan interjected "Fenris one was taught to fight from the beggining as was our last experiment, and that is the reason i have this very Cane because from kittenhood you Taught, no abused our last one into hating everyone including..." "I am well aware of the Ramifications of you sticking too much of that Berserker Serum in it." "..DO NOT PIN THE RESULT OF YOUR CRUELTY ON MY FATHER'S WORK OR MINE!" Krorvankan roared. "Please please Gentlemen Gentlemen we don't need to start a Brawl over this. calm yourselves." Takano said trying to be the voice of reason, although it was true,she herself was a survivor of the 'second attempt' Failure, she had seen the last Feline Berserker nearly destroy the entire complex. And she also saw the treatment she was given beforehand. * * * Yuri laid out sprawled on the ground Rowling and mewing in an odd way. she timed this so as she did Tom would walk by before she got too tired doing it. "..Yuri?" Tom said "are you okay? "Weowall owlreowl" Yuri responded attempting to get up collapsing then getting up again, favoring one paw. Tom his eyes wide with concern walked toward the glass cell thats it thats it now open the door..cmon tommy open up the door Yuri continued playacting as Tom walked in. then she sat up, holding her front leg up doing what by cat standereds Crying. her ears were folded back as her paw was waved up flinching when it touched the ground. Tom walked a little closer "Yur..HUH?" he was cut off as Yuri ran beneath his legs. "oh no you don't!" he said grabbing Yuri by the tail and yanking her backwards, stupid move. the Black and orange cat rounded on him scratching his face up. "What the..Aaggh" he yelled wrenching Yuri from his head and slamming the door shut. "crazy a** cat..." * * * Krovankan looked angerly at Takano (who suddenly decided that it was best to stay in the corner for this one) "Can you even remember the way you treated her? is your memory so short!" he yelled. * * * To humanity i am a weapon... Torayou thought to herself sitting in the passenger seat of a large Jeep, they had been traveling for several days and and had traveled several miles. A weapon an object i wasn't a real being to him i was an animal, that is why they had me born like a cat, damn the agility and other assets they claimed, the only asset they cared about was that it could be proof that i was not human and therefore inferior. She remembered it all, the beatings the Scoldings even when she hadn't failed, it was never enough for that man...that damned man in green. * * * "What the hell are you talking about now old man! She was made to kill as is this one! and making her a weakling will win no war!" the General yelled. "WILL THE TWO OF YOU STOP NOW!" the General looked at the two who for whatever reason were left in charge of 111889. "it hardly matters now, I should have all of you reported to the secret police and Arrested, but it won't if you are alive or not, As of tomorrow..." he said placing a document on the desk "Project Fenris is now no longer under your Jurisdiction." he spat Takano snatched up the document and read it.
due to Rebel attacks and various other happenings of import I hereby declare that Project Fenris' Millitary Training be moved up effective immediatly. Signed, Emperor James Marex III
"oh..my..god.." she said starting to sob. My Little Yuri..God have mercy on her, because she is the only one right now who derserves it * * * The jeep halted to stop and men poured out of their Vehicles setting up 'Base' this is where it would all start. Captain Kemen stood ontop of his Pickup truck Technical cab barking out orders. "all right idiots Mark this day well it is the day that will be remembered for years and years as the turning point in the entire war, Mark this day lads, the day that we gain Another!" the men Roared and Torayou smiled. she watched admiring the Captain work. then she looked over at the building in the distance. thinking again of the Prize. A day to remember it will be she said grinning.
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Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2005 7:34 pm
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Posted: Thu Apr 28, 2005 5:33 am
I love this story! I hope you keep writing more. It's great. 3nodding heart biggrin
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Posted: Thu Apr 28, 2005 12:22 pm
If you put in the effort to proof-read I might like it a little more.
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Posted: Thu Apr 28, 2005 12:44 pm
grey_eye_guy19 If you put in the effort to proof-read I might like it a little more. dude she's got a great story going, don't diss her about little thinks like little things like the ocasonal typo I happens to everyone even you stare
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Posted: Thu Apr 28, 2005 12:46 pm
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Posted: Thu Apr 28, 2005 12:54 pm
Elana_chan grey_eye_guy19 If you put in the effort to proof-read I might like it a little more. dude she's got a great story going, don't diss her about little thinks like little things like the ocasonal typo I happens to everyone even you stare It's called constructive criticism. She should thank him for not giving a worthless comment. That being said, Nekotalim, I think your biggest problem is capitalizing letters. Remember, the presentation is just as important. wink
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Posted: Thu Apr 28, 2005 6:59 pm
people commented..and not Just Elana_Chan *hugs you all* You people have no idea how good it is to know that people are reading my comic* *Squeals* with that said Chapter VI coming right up.
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