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 Posted: Fri Jun 16, 2006 6:41 pm
I'm sitting here writing songs about you
For you to hear the things i think about you
You never felt the same
the same way i do
And I can't stop it[x2]
Singing this won't mean a lot too you.
You love her and you pushed me out from you
I know you won't tell me you love me
'Cause you know I love you
I'm sititng here thinking about you
you know you have my heart
I wish you feel teh same
the same way i do
So I bleed within my heart.[x2]
Singing this won't mean a lot to you.
You love her and you pushed me out from you
I know you won't tell me you love me
'Cause you know I love you
Maybe one day you'd talk to me again
But I'm not so sure
Maybe my pain will never stop
But it lasts forever
Maybe if the knife to my throat goes
But I'm sure you would never know
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Posted: Sat Jun 17, 2006 2:08 am
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Posted: Sun Jun 18, 2006 6:56 pm
it is ok but i would have made it a little longer
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Posted: Mon Jun 19, 2006 5:59 pm
Ohhh yeah I'm still working on it. But i can't think of anything for quite a while now
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Posted: Thu Jun 22, 2006 7:14 pm
It's a good song! A bit more length and it'd be great! I was actually singing it to myself while I read it biggrin
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Posted: Fri Jun 23, 2006 10:57 pm
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Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 12:50 am
"pushing me out from you"
I might change that line a little... it sounds bit a weird to me.
Otherwise I think you have the beginnings of a great song. So many of the greatest songs just have really simple lyrics like this one, written straight from the heart. heart
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