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 Posted: Mon Apr 04, 2005 9:34 pm
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Posted: Mon Apr 04, 2005 9:43 pm
that's so good 3nodding i suck at writing poems, so i dont even try anymore sweatdrop
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Posted: Mon Apr 04, 2005 10:21 pm
cute_kitty606 that's so good 3nodding i suck at writing poems, so i dont even try anymore sweatdrop Just post it!! I don't know if you suck cause I've never heard you do a poem before! So just try it, cause I love reading poems
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Posted: Mon Apr 04, 2005 11:33 pm
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Posted: Tue Apr 05, 2005 9:35 pm
SpUnKtAsTiC cute_kitty606 that's so good 3nodding i suck at writing poems, so i dont even try anymore sweatdrop Just post it!! I don't know if you suck cause I've never heard you do a poem before! So just try it, cause I love reading poems noooooo, when i suck i mean i REALLY SUCK! 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Apr 06, 2005 11:33 pm
let is see, ore i will pm you the whole time with: you are good..you are good...you are good.
believe more i yourself!
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Posted: Sat Apr 09, 2005 1:18 pm
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Posted: Sat Apr 09, 2005 1:19 pm
She
SHE
She...
She is the cause
For all my pain
She...
she is controlling
unfair
violent
obnoxious
annoying
ignorant
immature
SHE
she's always right
she's never wrong
I.....
I cried alone
in the dark depths of my mind
I....
I couldn't stand it
I ran from it
looking for a way out
I
I got away
from the abuse
both physical and mental
I
I saved my sanity
I saved it from her
She....
She's in my past now
but my scars remain
I...
I'm slowly healing
Each day the lacerations' pain ease with new hope
I
I cry in happiness
For I am finally spared of her venting
She....
may she feel the pain I endured for twelve years
in hell
But forever the memories will remain
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Posted: Sat Apr 09, 2005 2:58 pm
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Posted: Sat Apr 09, 2005 3:52 pm
didnt we have a discussion about writting and poems and such last night in the thread. xd Those poems are really good, I'll post some of mine up here later.
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Posted: Tue Apr 12, 2005 8:33 am
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Posted: Wed Apr 13, 2005 4:23 pm
Sometime ago
Sometimes ago
I’ve seen you somewhere
And my memory
Tells me so
Smoke clears
I shed tears
I’m here and bruised
I’m brutal and cruel
I’m bleed and drool
My sorrows
Saving them for tomorrow
Take me by the hand
Or just leave and let go
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Posted: Wed Apr 13, 2005 4:58 pm
Mine suck...but here's one...
sweatdrop
'I screwed up again
Lost my head and failed
Falling victim to my biggest fan
My boat of pride and will has sailed
I've fallen too much
Bending and breaking my body and mind
Until I need a crutch
And then start to fall behind
Lyring to those I love
Giving reassurances of my feelings
Without being able to rise above
My true pain and sufferings
Music's melody and tune
Gives me a reason to live on
And not die too soon
So I'll be here now and after I'm gone
I want to block out
The world's problems
Or else my mind will drought
And sew up my life's hems.'
sweatdrop
Here's one more I'll bore you with:
'My knees tremble
As my feet quake
While I lost this gamble
With death, giving the life I take
Pissed off at everything
I find everyone annoying
My ******** body aches
I hate what it takes
I am sinner's joy
Pain is bliss
I am death's toy
Awaiting it's kiss
A tear falls to the ground
As my mouth whimpers a sound
It has come to a start
As I'm torn apart
My eyes burn
Becoming flat and sore
My stomach begins to churn
Cramping me from the core
My chest crack
My strength lacks
As I hold my fists
Against my heart's nests
I fall face first
Into my own blood, oh it hurts so much
Overcome by thirst
I'm just felt death's sweet, sorrowful touch.'
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Posted: Wed Apr 13, 2005 5:06 pm
Knight Reaver Mine suck...but here's one...
sweatdrop
'I screwed up again
Lost my head and failed
Falling victim to my biggest fan
My boat of pride and will has sailed
I've fallen too much
Bending and breaking my body and mind
Until I need a crutch
And then start to fall behind
Lyring to those I love
Giving reassurances of my feelings
Without being able to rise above
My true pain and sufferings
Music's melody and tune
Gives me a reason to live on
And not die too soon
So I'll be here now and after I'm gone
I want to block out
The world's problems
Or else my mind will drought
And sew up my life's hems.'
sweatdrop
Here's one more I'll bore you with:
'My knees tremble
As my feet quake
While I lost this gamble
With death, giving the life I take
Pissed off at everything
I find everyone annoying
My ******** body aches
I hate what it takes
I am sinner's joy
Pain is bliss
I am death's toy
Awaiting it's kiss
A tear falls to the ground
As my mouth whimpers a sound
It has come to a start
As I'm torn apart
My eyes burn
Becoming flat and sore
My stomach begins to churn
Cramping me from the core
My chest crack
My strength lacks
As I hold my fists
Against my heart's nests
I fall face first
Into my own blood, oh it hurts so much
Overcome by thirst
I'm just felt death's sweet, sorrowful touch.' I LIKE YOURS!!
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Posted: Fri Apr 15, 2005 7:15 am
The Memory Of Your Death
I remember when you died
I stayed up all night
I sobbed
Whined, complained, and mostly cried
I never got to say
What I wanted to say
Now here's my chance
Good bye
And good night
To you my dear
I hope you can hear
Farewell
To you my love
Farewell
Tot he Heavens above
Is this better in a way
Or do I sit & stay
Is it better if I went
If this what I really meant
What the worst I can say
THe fact
I sopke up today
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