I can't believe no one has posted a reply yet!
I thought that this was a good beginning to an interesting story.
But I do have one constructive criticism, it felt too me that too much happened in this just one chapter. I think if you went over it and fleshed out the environment, or described the general 'world' a bit then the reader (people like me) would sort of know where they stood in relating to your characters. I understand that these kids are blessed at the same time trying to lead 'normal' lives (hence the training and the classroom) but is this america, australia, planet zerop?
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