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At the end it kinda looks like Sai is flying. xP

I liked it. I think Sai was jumping out of a window or that was a painting or something.

Tch-- *spazzes* OH SO MENDOU. rolleyes

Excuse my rudeness. But... Nevermind. Pretend I was never here. surprised

I was referring to how you said it.

Anyways, no worries. I was bored by it, too.
I'm also bored by a lot, though, so I really can't tell the difference if it's really boring or not.

When I first read this chapter through, it was... tedious... but after reading it over again, I find that I quite enjoy it. It struck me as odd when Naruto started to cry... is he losing his self-confidence? That really isn't like him, or at least how he used to be. Remember, a long time ago when he preached to Inari how crying is useless... and how you shouldn't cry unless you're happy? ...

I don't like it... Something about Naruto crying just seems wrong... >>

It was very pleasing to me when Sakura was the one to say that it's useless to cry, I must admit. Somehow, that made this chapter the one where I actually realized that she's become a lot stronger... that she's grown out of her previous childishness.

And what of Sai? I'm glad that he's allowing himself to show emotions around others. I was worried that once he got back home, he would become 'emotionless' again, but obviously that isn't the case now.

This was an interesting chapter... at first glance, you'll hate it. When you look deeper, though... what it shows in the way of character development is astounding.

Call me crazy but I like Sai and Yamato better than Sasuke and Kakashi. ninja