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"Dancing With the King"

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Posted: Sat Jun 03, 2006 3:34 pm

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This picture has a very important meaning to me. The Snake repesents somthing I have feared my whole life, but I wish for the curage to be able to face my fear and be comfortable with it, like dancing.

Please tell me what you think, it is just a sketch.

Posted: Sat Jun 03, 2006 3:38 pm

hm. i really like the snake and the girls pose. the only thing i can really see that i would change would be the hair over her eye; im not really sure, but it looks too poofy and/or unnatural. and upon a second glance, it seems odd she isnt looking toward the snake; is there a reason for that? i know she's supposed to be conquering her fears, so that might be it. just curious. you've got a great start here. i cant wait to see it when its finished!

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Dirty_sox3
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Posted: Sat Jun 03, 2006 3:53 pm

the idea is wonderful. *waits to see the finished drawing*

Posted: Sat Jun 03, 2006 3:59 pm

the hair is a little 'cartoony' I am going to fix it up a little. As for the eye, I would have to say, that she is in a hypnotic state, not too convinced that what she is doing was the best of her ideas. But I think I will look into it some more.

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Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 12:02 pm

I would make her right leg ( our left) more, relaxed, more bent, now its a little bit to static. 3nodding further pretty, and a nice sort of exiting around it.

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