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 Posted: Fri Jun 02, 2006 4:51 pm
Post your poetry and talk about it among fellow guild members!
I'll start off
The Ides of May
I hear your screams, I hear your cries
You know I've come to make you die
Don't act as if you seem surprised
I gave you love, you gave me lies
I've come to take your life away
On this cold night in middle May
I said I'd come in fifteen days
Don't waste words, you've nothing to say
I shall not change, my mind is set
Upon me causing you your death
It's time you've paid forgotten debts
Realize my words weren't empty threats
As your blood splatters on the walls
I see your body slowly fall
On the floor like a broken doll
My name the last word that you call
A dreadful choice to take a life
I took two lives that fateful night
The life of me and of my wife
So embittered I was with strife
Rather than live a life of lies
I chose murder and suicide
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Posted: Fri Jun 02, 2006 6:48 pm
Hmm I'm not the best a poetry.
sweatdrop
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Restless Peace Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Jun 02, 2006 11:32 pm
Harumi-san Hmm I'm not the best a poetry.
sweatdrop me either surprised i'll see if i cant type up my poems that i wrote later 3nodding
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Posted: Fri Jun 02, 2006 11:36 pm
My Heart Aches...
By Jesse Aaron, writen to the love of my life, Melissa DeBartolo
My heart aches
Because I broke yours
I thought it was a toy
But now i see
That i was blind
To all that you were feeling
Now im torn up inside
Because of what I have done
And now i see, that al you've done
Has been only good things for me
Sure, sometimes you make me sad
And even sometimes a little mad
But in the long run
It doesnt matter
For i know that you still love me...
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Restless Peace Vice Captain
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Restless Peace Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Jun 02, 2006 11:43 pm
The Forgiveness of Love
By Jesse Aaron, writen to the love of my life, Melissa DeBartolo
The forgiveness of love
Doesn't always come fast
Sometimes it takes it takes weeks or months
And in that time, people often look back
To see what they went through
To get to where they are today
Often times, i look forward
And wonder what the future holds
Will I love you?
Will you love me?
Will we be married with kids?
All these things race through my mind
As i wait for your forgiveness
I know that you're trying
For your heart to make peace with me
So take your time to straighten things out
I've got the rest of my life
To gain back the trust that I lost
I'll be waiting here for you
To make your final call
If you even still love me at all...
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Posted: Sat Jun 03, 2006 6:14 pm
Harumi-san Hmm I'm not the best a poetry.
sweatdrop well then, critique others poems then ^_^
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Posted: Sat Jun 03, 2006 7:13 pm
This is so funny because in english we JUST started our poetry unit!
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Posted: Sat Jun 03, 2006 7:21 pm
ambie_bambie This is so funny because in english we JUST started our poetry unit! lol
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Restless Peace Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 5:41 pm
The White Winged Angel ambie_bambie This is so funny because in english we JUST started our poetry unit! lol I'm doing so bad at poetry, I wrote a poem about writers block. I might post it later.
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Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 6:30 pm
The Blood Red Rose
This road I walk is long and cold
Yet I don't think I'm all that bold
For going down this path I chose
Bribed was I with a lovely rose
To see that rose, I walk alone
Deep down far into the unknown
Just to glimpse those blood red petals
Worth more than any precious metals
Many red roses I have passed
But none held any sort of class
Some withered and beginning to fade
Others just not the right red shade
The blood red rose that I do seek
Is nothing like the others, weak
The rose I want is strong and true
Nothing but the best will do
Time continues passing me by
But I never let my hope die
My wish to see that pretty flower
Leaves me with an unknown power
No matter how far this road leads
I'll walk it until I do succeed
In reaching the end of the way
I'll continue on passing the days
Too late it is to turn back now
To change my path, I can't allow
I continue down this path I chose
In search of that lovely blood red rose
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Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 8:27 pm
oh, i forgot to ask, feedback on mah poems? surprised im eager to hear whachya'll gota say 'bout 'um 3nodding i just got back frum a chicken feed surprised couldja tell?
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Posted: Tue Jun 06, 2006 9:58 pm
The White Winged Angel oh, i forgot to ask, feedback on mah poems? surprised im eager to hear whachya'll gota say 'bout 'um 3nodding i just got back frum a chicken feed surprised couldja tell? They're diferent...in a good way...
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Posted: Tue Jun 06, 2006 10:03 pm
Okies so this is aParker told us not to rhyme too much because the emphasis is on the adjetives
Writers block
Sitting stiffly in this cold hard chair
Holding the pencil,
although nothing is written the pen is dull
like the silver light or the moon shadowed by clouds
both my brain and the page are empty
like a beggars pockets
a love lorn womans heart
I strain my thoughts
but they float away slowly
like a feather in the breeze
drooped carelessly from a high window
yes it sucks but I had writers block
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Posted: Wed Jun 07, 2006 1:34 pm
Where are all the happy, jolly, poems?
surprised
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Posted: Wed Jun 07, 2006 2:40 pm
Harumi-san Where are all the happy, jolly, poems?
surprised Happy and jolly? I don't do those kinds of poems XD
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