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 Posted: Thu Jun 01, 2006 1:24 pm
what do you think is it pretty???  "inside of me is asleeping beauty because of that Im sleepless"
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Posted: Thu Jun 01, 2006 4:53 pm
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Posted: Thu Jun 01, 2006 5:02 pm
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Posted: Thu Jun 01, 2006 7:19 pm
I don't get it either. sweatdrop
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Posted: Thu Jun 01, 2006 8:56 pm
It's cute but i dan't get it either.... sweatdrop Gomen....
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Posted: Fri Jun 02, 2006 4:45 am
waaaaaaaaaaaaa baka!!!
inside of ryuichi is the serious and mysterious ryu that "sleeps" & "hide" but wake up to sing on the other hand there is the childish & energetic ryu that "never sleep"and drive everone crazy get it?
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Posted: Fri Jun 02, 2006 10:52 am
I 'technically' understood what you were trying to get at, but there's no euphony, no flow. Besides, from the sentence(s), it isn't apparent what you mean.
Inside of me is a sleeping beauty <-- That sentence sounds alright as a stand alone, and many Gravitation fans would understand, but add:
Because of that I am sleepless <-- It no longer pleases the ears to hear and it takes away from your message. I'd reword this, or replace it in its entirety if you want to get your message accross.
If I were you, I'd drop the whole 'sleepless' part and take a different approach. Childish and energetic =/= sleepless.
(I understand the reference to Sleepless Beauty, and why you'd want to keep it, but your approach doesn't work. I would think that would be obvious from the replies you've received)
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Posted: Fri Jun 02, 2006 11:19 am
Rhazia
I 'technically' understood what you were trying to get at, but there's no euphony, no flow. Besides, from the sentence(s), it isn't apparent what you mean.
Inside of me is a sleeping beauty <-- That sentence sounds alright as a stand alone, and many Gravitation fans would understand, but add:
Because of that I am sleepless <-- It no longer pleases the ears to hear and it takes away from your message. I'd reword this, or replace it in its entirety if you want to get your message accross.
If I were you, I'd drop the whole 'sleepless' part and take a different approach. Childish and energetic =/= sleepless.
(I understand the reference to Sleepless Beauty, and why you'd want to keep it, but your approach doesn't work. I would think that would be obvious from the replies you've received)
ok but any way I like it like that it dramatic & deep and the ones who can really understand the sentence is the ones who know ryuichi and I dont say that because Im obsession with him or something(and Im not) I say that because Im similar with him (p.s- If my grammar suck sorry about it)
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Posted: Wed Jun 07, 2006 5:11 pm
Ok, but any way anyway, I like it, like that it is dramatic & deep,
and the ones who can really understand the sentence is are the ones who know Ryuichi. I don't say that because I'm obsessed with him or something (and I'm not), I say that because I'm similar with to him.
(P.S.- If my grammar sucks, sorry about it.)
I'm sorry. I had to.
First off, I want to point out that there is no such thing as an "asleeping beauty." I think you mean "a sleeping beauty." I'm honestly not trying to sound snarky, but it makes you look illiterate. (Oh, Kami, this is mean. gonk ) I understand what you're trying to say, and it really doesn't have to make sense to anyone but yourself, so if you like it, I'd say that you should go on with your bad self. biggrin
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Posted: Fri Jun 09, 2006 7:52 am
I CANT TAKE IT ANYMORE PLEASE KILL ME!!!! gonk crying
MAMYYYYYYYYYY!!!!
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Posted: Fri Jun 09, 2006 6:23 pm
Awesome....... stare ::points off into the distance:: Isn't that Yuki making out with Shuichi!!! Mine! ::Steals kawaii siggy::
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Posted: Wed Jun 21, 2006 9:32 am
*shruggs shoulders* it's ok.
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Posted: Wed Jun 21, 2006 4:01 pm
xd xd xd Tuna gets it!! I actually like it, the sleeping/sleepless thing is very nice. Goes very well with Ryuichi (Sleepless Beauty, I get it!! xd xd ), I especially like the two Gaian Ryuichis, it makes the meaning more obvious. Good job~~ 3nodding
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Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 9:30 am
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Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 12:27 pm
If I understood it I would like it better. sweatdrop
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