Welcome to Gaia! ::

Mirror Mirror on the wall
Show my other face to all
I am weak I am weak
Cry out, yet never speak
Watch me slip watch me fall
Before your eyes, see not at ******** up mess lying on the floor
Pathetic weakling nothing more
Self-absorbed, lonely, cold
Reaching out for hope to hold
Optimism giving out
One more cut for the count
I am fine, I am great
Such a lie, you ought to hate
One more day, one more week
Never finding what I seek
How much longer will it go
Will it change, I’d like to know
Depression feelings flowing free
Can’t you see, this is me!


Comments/Critiques welcome

I actually liked it a lot. It's a bit depressing for my tastes but it sounds very good!