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Hero Of Three Kingdoms

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PostPosted: Mon May 29, 2006 10:36 am


just some poetry of mine one in the guild one out

this is too my beloved
Lover's Creed


On the net is where i found her voice
Before we spoke i had made my choice
To live for her love and grace
To give no second thought to a second of her embrace

Where my thoughts and feelings held
Here may my hearts desires meld
To let her know our souls entwined
Is a larger miracle than turning water to wine

Extinguished the flames of my heart are not
through the flames i sought and fought
to finds the words to voice my heart
I would travel through universal charts

to unchain the heart of thine
to let you know we will work out fine
Rather this is destiny's sway
Or Fortuna at play

There aren't enough words to desribe how i feel
so upon these words i seal
My heart mind strength and will
To make your nightmares still

giving us the strength to heal
By returning our want to feel
I let you know this in case of need
That this is my Lover's Creed.



this is the Hero Arakimos poetry battle

Hero Of Three Kingdoms Wrote:
naa i am on the side of the grey


Arakimos Wrote:

Then thou art not seen within a rainstorm?

Sneaking silent in the night
Fear of darkness and of light
Never stalking through the day
Living life through shades of gray


Hero Of Three Kingdoms Wrote:
yes i am.

I am grey.
I use the powers of the light.
I control the powers of the night.
I am not good, I am not evil.
I am the wind without the breeze.
I am the fire without the heat.
I am knowledge without reason.
I am love without passion.
I am grey.


Arakimos Wrote:

Distant shadow of the sun
Let us know you'll be the one
Vanquish evil, vanquish good
Neutral tidings, bring thou should
And from the wrath of one so grey
Take from both sides, make them pay
For in the darkness, in the light
Slay them all, all those in sight

Hero Of Three Kingdoms Wrote:

Through the violence of the fight
Through the powers of just and right
Through the powers that bring fear and blight
Through the lines in which they fight
I bring their death for thus said reasons
For my sins and all my deeds
For my love and all her needs
For the money that may feed
For the farmers and their seeds
I fight for reasons niether good nor bad
Be they right or be they wrong
Be their death be in their bed or within the throngs
Be their names be found in words of song
Be their end be short or long
For those like i that are the grey we walk a line
Between good and evil, night and day,
Let it be known for all to hear we are the grey, we are the grey
PostPosted: Mon May 29, 2006 12:06 pm


Interesting... so, which 'net' was this which you met her upon? I mean... net? yeah.. net... if by net you mean THE net... then...
....interesting poem... ninja rhythm's kinda hard to follow... but maybe I just don' know how to read it... ninja ninja

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Hero Of Three Kingdoms

Familiar Lunatic

PostPosted: Mon May 29, 2006 1:22 pm


Arakimos
Interesting... so, which 'net' was this which you met her upon? I mean... net? yeah.. net... if by net you mean THE net... then...
....interesting poem... ninja rhythm's kinda hard to follow... but maybe I just don' know how to read it... ninja ninja
likely a little bit of all of it XD it is a rough draft though i just wanted to get the actual thoughts down then work on the words i used to express them
PostPosted: Mon May 29, 2006 2:23 pm


Hero Of Three Kingdoms
Arakimos
Interesting... so, which 'net' was this which you met her upon? I mean... net? yeah.. net... if by net you mean THE net... then...
....interesting poem... ninja rhythm's kinda hard to follow... but maybe I just don' know how to read it... ninja ninja
likely a little bit of all of it XD it is a rough draft though i just wanted to get the actual thoughts down then work on the words i used to express them


Indeed... I mean, my sis does that too... i mean, she writes poems that rhyme well... but the rhythm is off... so like... I'm all "Well, it's good... but also... it's not good... sweatdrop "

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Hero Of Three Kingdoms

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PostPosted: Mon May 29, 2006 3:06 pm


Arakimos
Hero Of Three Kingdoms
Arakimos
Interesting... so, which 'net' was this which you met her upon? I mean... net? yeah.. net... if by net you mean THE net... then...
....interesting poem... ninja rhythm's kinda hard to follow... but maybe I just don' know how to read it... ninja ninja
likely a little bit of all of it XD it is a rough draft though i just wanted to get the actual thoughts down then work on the words i used to express them


Indeed... I mean, my sis does that too... i mean, she writes poems that rhyme well... but the rhythm is off... so like... I'm all "Well, it's good... but also... it's not good... sweatdrop "
i will eventually get around to cutting out some words and replacing them so the rhythm is better and not taking away from the rhyme
PostPosted: Mon May 29, 2006 3:10 pm


Hero Of Three Kingdoms
Arakimos
Hero Of Three Kingdoms
Arakimos
Interesting... so, which 'net' was this which you met her upon? I mean... net? yeah.. net... if by net you mean THE net... then...
....interesting poem... ninja rhythm's kinda hard to follow... but maybe I just don' know how to read it... ninja ninja
likely a little bit of all of it XD it is a rough draft though i just wanted to get the actual thoughts down then work on the words i used to express them


Indeed... I mean, my sis does that too... i mean, she writes poems that rhyme well... but the rhythm is off... so like... I'm all "Well, it's good... but also... it's not good... sweatdrop "
i will eventually get around to cutting out some words and replacing them so the rhythm is better and not taking away from the rhyme


Sounds like a plan mrgreen domokun

Arakimos
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Hero Of Three Kingdoms

Familiar Lunatic

PostPosted: Mon May 29, 2006 3:12 pm


Arakimos
Hero Of Three Kingdoms
Arakimos
Hero Of Three Kingdoms
Arakimos
Interesting... so, which 'net' was this which you met her upon? I mean... net? yeah.. net... if by net you mean THE net... then...
....interesting poem... ninja rhythm's kinda hard to follow... but maybe I just don' know how to read it... ninja ninja
likely a little bit of all of it XD it is a rough draft though i just wanted to get the actual thoughts down then work on the words i used to express them


Indeed... I mean, my sis does that too... i mean, she writes poems that rhyme well... but the rhythm is off... so like... I'm all "Well, it's good... but also... it's not good... sweatdrop "
i will eventually get around to cutting out some words and replacing them so the rhythm is better and not taking away from the rhyme


Sounds like a plan mrgreen domokun
indeed but first i must right another for her and draw a picture for her as well
PostPosted: Mon May 29, 2006 4:16 pm


Wow... sounds like SOMEONE's sharin' a bed tonight.... twisted

Arakimos
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Hero Of Three Kingdoms

Familiar Lunatic

PostPosted: Mon May 29, 2006 6:04 pm


Arakimos
Wow... sounds like SOMEONE's sharin' a bed tonight.... twisted
no no not that yet but she will likely be telling me how sweet i am etc and i will feel good since i made her happy and that is all i want
PostPosted: Mon May 29, 2006 6:40 pm


Good stuff. 3nodding

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Arakimos
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PostPosted: Mon May 29, 2006 7:04 pm


Hero Of Three Kingdoms
Arakimos
Wow... sounds like SOMEONE's sharin' a bed tonight.... twisted
no no not that yet but she will likely be telling me how sweet i am etc and i will feel good since i made her happy and that is all i want


Ah, so Hero likes to please his woman, eh? wink
PostPosted: Mon May 29, 2006 7:18 pm


Arakimos
Hero Of Three Kingdoms
Arakimos
Wow... sounds like SOMEONE's sharin' a bed tonight.... twisted
no no not that yet but she will likely be telling me how sweet i am etc and i will feel good since i made her happy and that is all i want


Ah, so Hero likes to please his woman, eh? wink
if by that you mean all i want is her happiness then yes i do

Hero Of Three Kingdoms

Familiar Lunatic


Arakimos
Crew

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PostPosted: Mon May 29, 2006 10:17 pm


Hero Of Three Kingdoms
Arakimos
Hero Of Three Kingdoms
Arakimos
Wow... sounds like SOMEONE's sharin' a bed tonight.... twisted
no no not that yet but she will likely be telling me how sweet i am etc and i will feel good since i made her happy and that is all i want


Ah, so Hero likes to please his woman, eh? wink
if by that you mean all i want is her happiness then yes i do


What if that's NOT what I meant? mrgreen xd
PostPosted: Tue May 30, 2006 5:59 am


Arakimos
Hero Of Three Kingdoms
Arakimos
Hero Of Three Kingdoms
Arakimos
Wow... sounds like SOMEONE's sharin' a bed tonight.... twisted
no no not that yet but she will likely be telling me how sweet i am etc and i will feel good since i made her happy and that is all i want


Ah, so Hero likes to please his woman, eh? wink
if by that you mean all i want is her happiness then yes i do


What if that's NOT what I meant? mrgreen xd
then is yet to be known but it a educated opinion YES

Hero Of Three Kingdoms

Familiar Lunatic


Galestream
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PostPosted: Tue May 30, 2006 7:45 am


Yeah...I agree with Shawn the rhythm is off
not a subtraction of a few words wouldn't fix
3nodding

I haven't written a poem since the last time Shawn was all emo
surprised
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